INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 15, Playing in the Big Leagues
Added 2025-09-12 12:46:02 +0000 UTCI had a lot of fun with this chapter, so let me know if you like it. It goes to show that reader feedback helps influence the story. Sometimes you all come up with good ones.
Comments
Great chapter! Shame the boys didn't see some action though. 😁
Steve Chance
2025-09-15 22:20:35 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Most fun I've had reading in quite awhile. Glad to see the hard core drama again. And anything that gets Owen and Tif laid is always good for me. For the edit: "Owen stared straight ahead as Jake swung the SUV onto Highway 1." Should be 101 where the studio is? And here's totally picky for ya, U.S.101 is 4 lane center divided highway throughout that stretch. The passing game woulda been different.
wayne seitz
2025-09-15 21:13:50 +0000 UTC
