INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 4, In the Eyes of the Confessor
Added 2025-07-17 00:54:01 +0000 UTCThis one was intended to be just a single scene but then I found that telling just an abbreviated version of the story of the polyamorous relationship would take an entire chapter. So, here it is. Hopefully it doesn't read like a clips episode on a 1970s sit-com. That was not my intention. Let me know how I'm doing, like always.
Comments
What another excellent chapter! I think the best line in there was when Jake told Caydee sticking it to the Man. As always another great chapter and as Jake says always leave them wanting and looking for more.thanks Al for writing such intriguing prose
Alan M.
2025-07-21 10:07:12 +0000 UTCI'm not sure how this is all going to play out yet.
Al Steiner
2025-07-20 21:34:15 +0000 UTCIs this going to possibly lead to the resolution of the 'fake abusive Jake' subplot? Because mixed in with everything is the rumor that Jake is an abuser. Will his ex come forward and set the record straight? This would be a whole chapter by itself.
RLDel
2025-07-19 23:37:56 +0000 UTC
