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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 10, Truth and Justice

No charge for LIS chapters. Here is the latest in the story. I hope everyone likes it still.

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What time loop mention? And no. DIAO is a universe onto itself.

Al Steiner

It has been years since I've read "Doing it All Over," is the time loop mention a reference to that story?

Seth Brown

Judith embodies the saying that the less power somebody has the more they feel the need to exercise it.. Love the story

WaltS

That was an actual call I was on as a paramedic probably twenty years ago or more. And to this day, whenever someone asks me or anyone in my presence "What do you want?" my first thought is "truth and justice."

Al Steiner

I don't even know what you mean by that.

Al Steiner

Nope. Just the same universe twenty years later.

Al Steiner

Fun story

Robar

Was that [fire] a Doors reference? Also, of late some of your descriptive sentences seem to channel Raymond Chandler, in the very best of ways. Thanks for the great writing!

Paul Mueller

Nice "tie-in" at the end.....shall we expect a rock singer or two in this story?

Russ Wideman

Really enjoying this story. Like others have mentioned would be willing to pay for it. I am here for good Al Steiner stories and this qualifies. The name of Lena's dog changed. In chapter 9 Samantha think the dog is named something like Ranger or Ringo. But later in Lena's house the dog is referred to as Scout. In chapter 10 the dog is referred to as Ranger.

Adam

Hi Al. With you now posting different stories here on Patreon, would you be so kind to sort them into collections?

Folterknecht

Great new chapter, and I love the Mary Ann Cummings reference! Intemperance universe confirmed!

Eric

Damn. I had forgotten about the Antarctic Treaty of 1959. That's the key that joins all the pieces of the puzzle together. Now it ALL makes SENSE!

wulf losee

Truth and justice...it's gonna be my answer now too! Awesome chapter!

Earl Calvert


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