INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 1, Every Breath You Take
Added 2025-07-01 17:54:25 +0000 UTCAnd here is the first chapter of Book X. It picks up shortly after the end of Book IX. I think I have a strong arc here. As always, let me know how I'm doing.
Comments
I'm curious about the use of polyamorous triple, and not triad. Was that the common usage in the early 2000's?
Andrew Single
2025-07-07 20:01:19 +0000 UTCSorry for being slow with comment - I had to finish rereading Book lX and marinating it before start Book X! I totally get the upside down moon and Sun in the wrong direction thing having visited downunder a few times over the years - very disconcerting especially when driving! Excellent start to this book! Well done Al!
David Stewart
2025-07-06 14:22:40 +0000 UTC
