INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 19, Gimme Shelter
Added 2025-06-02 02:17:31 +0000 UTCThe next chapter of my primary saga. The dust settles after the Judge Olson debacle, or it mostly settles. A few loose ends need tidying up. And of course, there is lots of Kingsley absurdity to plow through just living life. And we get a little update and Massa and Meghan as well. Let me know how I'm doing, like always.
Comments
I like this - maybe not Caydee, but certainly something Bill or Owen could do applying their audio/computer abilities.
HAMBARCA22
2025-06-02 19:18:39 +0000 UTCAfter reading this chapter, I have a feeling Celia, Jake and Laura want to expedite the wrap up of their albums. No more Tif, Stevie, Liz or Intemperance band member drama. Just their own. Is Caydee advanced enough in her musical abilities to realize she could sample Pa-Ho’s calling her name as a backing track for a song?
SteveZ
2025-06-02 18:24:55 +0000 UTCA good entertaining chapter. I think the scene with Ms. Olson is illuminating. The first instict is that the Judge was a tyrant, and she was just as much a victim as Owen. But as in real life its never that simple. Good for Owen that he is taking first steps to forge his own path.
HAMBARCA22
2025-06-02 16:42:50 +0000 UTC
