INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 4, Practicing to Deceive
Added 2025-03-31 09:23:15 +0000 UTCI am very happy with this chapter as the prose flew out of me quite easily in a way it has not done in a while. I think everyone will like this chapter and agree that the story is moving along. I would like to thank my anonymous friend who helped me with the Spanish parts over the last few chapters. She has been invaluable, and I think her contribution makes the dialogue sing. As always, let me know what you think. Many of the plot turns in the series have come from reader suggestions (the entire Greg arc, for instance).
Comments
So Cap's first correctly articulated word is Shit. That's gonna liven up Sunday dinners.
EdM1950
2025-04-11 01:32:59 +0000 UTCHe's just being Greg. He can't help himself.
Al Steiner
2025-04-09 00:11:03 +0000 UTCI agree. I had a blast writing that one. It was fun to drop back into Greg's mind for a bit too.
Al Steiner
2025-04-09 00:10:37 +0000 UTCthat was a fun chapter!
Russ Wideman
2025-04-08 23:25:21 +0000 UTCDamnit Greg, act like a human!
Adam Driscoll
2025-04-08 06:38:56 +0000 UTC
