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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 15, Such are the Plans We Make

Another pivotal chapter in the tale as things start heading for a particular moment in time. The Kingsleys and their lover lay out their plans to their loved ones and those who need to know. As always, keep the feedback coming. It helps the story along.

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I don't think so at all! why?

JC

Sorry to say was disappointed with this chapter and feels like the story is meandering into the minutia of Jakes life. Why did Laura have to divorce him, why couldn't Celia marry another man that was sexless - just feels wrong in every sense....... i dont want the relationships to go wrong but this has all the hallmark of a disaster. hope I am proven wrong!

Steve Braden

I have been planning the 9-11 scenario for months as well.

Al Steiner

I'm surprised that only one other commenter has mentioned 9/11, especially since Al mentioned the possibility of the Kingsleys being in New England airspace in early September. However, I suspect they'll survive 9/11... I think some readers might react very negatively to the Kingsleys being inserted too closely into the 9/11 mythos. On the other hand, we ARE getting ever closer to the deadline for Matt's death (obliquely predicted in Chapter 1A of the first book).

Robert James


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