INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 13, Confessions
Added 2023-07-06 04:52:12 +0000 UTCSorry it took so long to get this one out. June was a busy month for me and this is setting up a pivotal chapter in the tale. I had a 32 hour trauma nursing course I had to attend and I had multiple overtimes shifts because of staffing issues, leaving me not as much time to write. But here we are at last and July seems to be mostly clear of other obligations. As always, let me know what you think. Things are heading in a certain direction here.
Comments
Small typo's: at the top of page 6 - “But it’s an impasse where get to be with each other,”; imo there should be a 'we' between 'where' and 'get'; near the bottom of page 11: 'camaras'
Alle Joeng
2023-09-07 17:11:22 +0000 UTCAs a rural hospital that is not a trauma center, we still have a large amount of walk-in trauma patients, usually ATV accidents and "hold my beer" kind of things. It's now required for us although they don't pay us any more for having it.
Al Steiner
2023-07-25 10:14:50 +0000 UTCTNCC? That is a rough class. I teach ATCN & TNCC was a rough class to take. I liked the chapter; confession was indeed the theme.
Adam Driscoll
2023-07-25 06:25:10 +0000 UTCBueno. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.
Gregory Stewart
2023-07-09 13:28:09 +0000 UTC
