INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 8, Temperance
Added 2023-04-15 19:10:19 +0000 UTCI seem to be back in rhythm again and producing at my normal pace. Here is the next chapter in which we get a look at how the Intemperance reunion is going and how Celia's relationship with Ron the pilot is developing. As always, let me hear your thoughts. I'm confident I'll be able to squeak out one more chapter before the end of the month.
Comments
I'm definitely trying to paint a specific picture when it comes to Ron and Celia and I believe I'm remaining in character for her. A female partner I worked with back in my EMS days went through a similar thing when she felt her biological clock starting to tick down. It was amazing to me the flaws in a boyfriend that she would overlook just because there was hope on the horizon of fulfilling her biological need.
Al Steiner
2023-04-23 17:38:28 +0000 UTCThat was a quality chapter. Congratulations to Jake on his recovery & return to making moo-zik. It seem like even Celia knows that her relationship with Ron isn't really going anywhere - even if she's not willing to admit it. Looking forward to seeing where the Intemp reunion goes, and what happens next.
Adam Driscoll
2023-04-22 17:54:32 +0000 UTCExcellent story with all the convolutions incomprehensible to average reader.
Brett Grayson
2023-04-19 16:19:12 +0000 UTC
