INTEMPERANCE VI - Chapter 23, Bringing it Home
Added 2022-09-14 07:04:19 +0000 UTCWe roll through the second half of Jake's show and then move onto the next city. A few dynamics among the characters are explored and Steph, Lucky, and James engage in a Pulp Fiction style dialogue regarding racial relations, homosexuality, and the origins of the species. As always, let me know how I'm doing. And try not to read too much into anything. Even I do not how all of this interplay is going to turn out.
Comments
Thank you! The next chapter will start to focus on the day to days of the tour. And don't forget, the factor of the groupie has not been introduced to the rookies yet.
Al Steiner
2022-09-25 10:56:20 +0000 UTCTiff is a gem, and she's got some of the best dialog in this chapter. It looks like she's going to have a battle on her hands for Massa. As i said with the last chapter, I love the bits of musician information (lyric pieces, chords, gear & setups), and I'm enjoying the tour bits as well - I'd forgotten those from the Intemperance days ...go figure, it's been a bit! Another very good chapter, and as always you've left us wanting more!
Adam Driscoll
2022-09-25 04:26:08 +0000 UTCYou are so mean to torture Massa like that! Poor guy!
Bob Noone
2022-09-19 12:23:35 +0000 UTC
