INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 25, The Naughty Nanny
Added 2021-11-07 02:44:13 +0000 UTCWell, I have more writing time on my hands this week since I am in isolation due to a Covid exposure. I'm doing well. I'm vaccinated, got Regeneron treatment, and generally just have to stay in my house for the next eight days or so. Not a bad deal, really. In any case, I was able to pump out the next chapter. This one kind of veered off from where I initially meant for it to go, but I went with it and ended up with something I rather like. I hope you all like it as well. Let me know, as always, your thoughts.
Comments
I am quite certain that has already been corrected in the Kindle version of the book. You will find the occasional error such as that in the Beta versions of the chapters here on Patreon. Please do not feel the need to point every one of them out unless it is a new chapter just posted.
Al Steiner
2022-03-26 20:30:42 +0000 UTCI’m late to the game and catching up on all the chapters. Loving the story, I think I caught some grammar error on page 16 when Pauline says “Maybe I can do something with I gather”. Doesn’t sound quite right,thought I would point it out, keep up the great work!
2022-03-26 13:45:54 +0000 UTCSometimes you gotta go where the muse takes you, right?
Greg Coleman
2021-11-08 19:42:23 +0000 UTCThank you. As I said, that one kind of veered off in its own direction, but I like where it went.
Al Steiner
2021-11-08 19:41:31 +0000 UTCLovely development of the newest member of the Kingsley’s staff, heart-string-tugging moments of family togetherness, and Pauline kicking ass and taking names (in her sweatpants at that!). A+ chapter once again.
Greg Coleman
2021-11-08 19:20:50 +0000 UTC
