INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 23, Negotiations and Disclosures
Added 2021-10-21 02:33:32 +0000 UTCI asked the question and the Patrons spoke up. So, here it is, the fourth chapter for the month. It is not as boring as the chapter title might imply. As always, please give me your feedback on the direction I'm going. Only a few more chapters left in Book 5 and your feedback has always helped me shape the story.
Comments
He has a tour to start rehearsals for soon.
Al Steiner
2021-10-26 02:13:41 +0000 UTCDo you think Matt will start fishing and move to Coos Bay
2021-10-26 02:04:09 +0000 UTCI think I've said thus before, but watching Jake fumble his way through normal life is pretty hilarious. It's a different take on 'rockstar life is hard' that always gives me a chuckle when he's shocked by ordinary stuff. Anyway, this was another enjoyable chapter (except that Russ beat me to the Meaghan question. Total bummer 😁) and I look forward to how they stop National from screwing them. Plus, I love the bits with Jake & Laura being parents to Caydee - I just enjoy watching the learning curve! Thanks Al, for another good 'un.
Adam Driscoll
2021-10-22 03:35:45 +0000 UTC
