INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 21, The Cadence of Life
Added 2021-10-12 02:33:31 +0000 UTCThe moment arrives and a new character is born - literally. Though it has been twenty-eight years now since I watched my first child emerge into the world, I remember the sights and sound, the feelings and emotions like they were yesterday. I tried my best to convey the experience here. Sorry if it's a little sappy, but it's honest. As always, let me know how I'm doing.
Comments
Great chapter! Definitely reminded me of when my two kids were born. Seeing your child being born is an amazing feeling and you did a great job of capturing the moment.
Shane Moore
2021-10-15 14:01:30 +0000 UTCVery well written and definitely deserving of its own chapter, even though I haven't experienced that myself. Had enough ups and downs and uncertainty to keep me interested while being appropriately sappy in some places.
Tim Keenan
2021-10-13 19:55:32 +0000 UTC
