INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 16, Triple Play
Added 2021-08-25 02:14:43 +0000 UTCThis is a pivotal chapter. I have spent most of this book gently and subtlety nudging things in this direction in order to maintain suspension of disbelief for when it finally occurs while simultaneously trying to not give you all foreshadowing that it was going to happen. Please let me know how I did in that regard and I hope that everyone enjoys the events that take place here. I certainly enjoyed writing it.
I'm including a link for a real estate listing in Malibu if anyone is interested in seeing what I based Celia's new house on. it is not exactly like hers since the listed house does not have a swimming pool, but the floor plan and the location are pretty much what I envisioned.
31444 Broad Beach Road, Malibu, CA 90265 - Listing #:21735150 (candwoherlihy.com)
Comments
I have lost count on the number of times I have re-read this chapter Al. Brilliant!
Dave Sanney
2021-09-02 04:01:42 +0000 UTCAs someone who may or may not have been involved in such a situation before, I know the reality is that there is a certain amount of awkwardness involved. It is not like a porno film. Thus my descriptions of hesitancy in both the Molly incident and this one.
Al Steiner
2021-08-31 05:00:30 +0000 UTCNot just plausible, you absolutely nailed it. *That* is what I pictured for the three of them when I mentioned the possibility a while back (damned if I remember when, or where it was tbh). But yeah, that was pretty close to perfectly written; believable and honest. I can't wait to see if Jake wins the bet ...
Adam Driscoll
2021-08-31 01:44:02 +0000 UTC
