INTEMPERANCE V - Chapter 13, Touching Bases
Added 2021-07-26 03:40:25 +0000 UTCThe rest of the visit with Laura's brother and plans for the future, including a bit of a bombshell. As always, let me know how I'm doing, particularly with Laura's family. They kind of grew on me a bit as I composed these last few chapters and they strongly resemble Mrs. Steiner's brother and his family.
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They are not allowed to have a boring life. That's the payoff for being successful.
Al Steiner
2021-07-31 20:29:34 +0000 UTCThat's a really great chapter! There's badness moving in again, and more crazy obsessed people stirring shit ...Jake & Laura can hardly catch a break!
Adam Driscoll
2021-07-30 17:55:50 +0000 UTCLaura has gone too far to return to her past full time.
Al Steiner
2021-07-27 07:56:52 +0000 UTCGreat chapter Al, great to see Laura (the Nymph) once again .... be Laura the nymph. I was beginning to wonder if she was going to her past. whew!
Russ Wideman
2021-07-27 00:15:46 +0000 UTC
