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Dotti... 'Don't Look'

Here's a Dotti strip I completed a couple of weeks ago but was reluctant to post - I'm just not very happy with this one...

I think the strip would have worked much better with the long socks, (darker legs would make the poses look stronger) and the perspective in the final panel is a bit wonky. Also, a landscape page is the wrong format for the compilation comic, so it's just a big thumbs down all round!πŸ‘Ž

Anyway, here it is warts and all - a Dotti work-in-progress :)

Tots x

Dotti... 'Don't Look'

Comments

Thank you, Jack :) T x

Totty

Thank you, Tyr :) T x

Totty

Thank you, Squash :) T x

Totty

Good point! πŸ˜‚T x

Totty

Thank you, Derek - I'm not appropriately dressed for snow!❄️ T x

Totty

Thank you, Nako :) T x

Totty

Thank you, Eric :) T x

Totty

Thank you, Jonathan - yes, I'm avoiding speech bubbles with this one :) T x

Totty

He's a little monster!

Totty

Well I for one absolutely love it!

Jack Cotton

I think the bare legs look is just so rare for you that every one I see i automatically love

TyrInYourEye

It's cute

squash wattage

Hahahaha

Rafa Luiz

Better to learn this lesson at a fence rather than a bathroom!

qotsa84

i u derstand you dont think its up to par, but i love it! especially the 3rd panel

Derek

Still a thumbs up in my book

Nako

It’s cute! Thank you totty

Eric

Love the silent film aesthetic of this character/comic!

Jonathan Coulton

That boy has an arm like a howitzer

Mike

I love it

Benjamin Armstrong


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