Neon Vein Chapter 5
Added 2025-08-31 16:00:10 +0000 UTCChapter 5 takes Veronica, Jess, Pamela, and Jack out of Blackridge and into dangerous new territory. Tensions rise and rules are tested as Marcia’s recklessness comes crashing into focus at Kaylee's bodybuilding debut.
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Hi! Sorry for taking so long to get back to you on this plane. Thanks for pointing out the error; it should be fixed now. Only issue now is Patreon had a slight hiccup in the editing page and wouldn't let me swap out the file directly, so had to make do by adding a second version of the PDF with the changes. As for your question about Pam's age: she's actually closer to her thirties than twenties. More reflective of my own age group. Easier to write that way as I get older myself. Having said that, there's probably some inconsistencies here and there that I'll have to iron out. Thanks for reaching out!
Amnoartist
2025-09-05 23:09:02 +0000 UTCAwesome! Loving this story, Pamela is shaping up to be my favorite. How old is she though? I was under the impression she was 19-20 herself, but this chapter makes it sound like she's older. Also, it seems like there was an editing note left in on page 194. "Perfect — here’s Marcia stepping in with shameless, fire-breathing defence of Kaylee, flipping the accusations into power and pride. I’ll let her voice run hot, in long, textured paragraphs, with the FMG heart beating right through it."
plane9
2025-08-31 20:16:46 +0000 UTC
