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"Used" - A Kid Laroi/Justin Bieber "Stay" rip off song

I had this idea in January to make a series where I would "rip off" famous songs and make very similar but different songs. I didn't end up wanting to finish it because the concept felt too derivative (lol) but I thought I'd share this VERY rough draft.

Absolutely laughing my head off hearing the vocal fail at around 1:21 hahahaha


Joel

Comments

Hearing for idk upteenth time. Nice use of venting. Let it go and no rent paid .

Gayle

Like the refrain,"Shut the f### up,". Definitely can relate. Rip off is an understatement, but wished you had used a deferent beat mix. Something a bit more angry. It felt too sarcastic and kind of pissy. Not in sync with how I view the tone from the lyrics. โœŒ๏ธโœŒ๏ธโœŒ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Gayle

Ooooh that's an interesting take! I always have in my mind the fact that i want to rip off a song, just to try to understand better the FX chain i could use, and to analyse way better a song composition, but this is next level ! very cool

Pouet

Hahaha! The "vocal fail" was lovely XD Made me giggle a bit. But this is a really nice track ^_^ I always just love hearing you sing no matter what you do. But do something that makes you feel good!

SpyroShurtagul

This song now and the new Panic! At The Disco song Viva Las VENGEANCE has the lyrics " Shut up & go to bed" sooo like Joel - "Shut the fuck up" & Panic! - "Shut up & go to bed!" So stfu & go to bed!!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚lol had to say it lol

CK DeP

The vocal โ€˜failโ€™ is absolutely hilarious!!!! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ I really needed that laugh today!! ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Chauchie Cortez

Lol the vocal fail sounded like he almost fell๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Jasmin

The vocal run is actually low key genius timing since thatโ€™s exactly how it would be said in the heat of the moment! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ˜‚

Jen ๐Ÿฆ™

๐Ÿ˜ณ wow the fail at 1.21 ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ love it

Fearless

I really like this. I think the best things about it are not the elements it has in common with Stay. Hope you pick the underlying song back up in some form eventually

emy

I will listen to this song to motivate myself to quit the job, โ€˜cause I feel used-used-used-used-used-used

N M

* Shut Up I'm Conducting Noises * ๐Ÿบ ๐Ÿพ

PhantomFidget

"'similar but sufficiently different for copyright reasons' song" ๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ

Sarah Faire

Lol the fail being on "stfu " makes it ever funnier

Juniper loo

Similar but different ๐Ÿ˜„ Very catchy but maybe not top notch ๐Ÿ™‚

Pearl Paisley

Lmao, that's awesome! ๐Ÿ”ฅ ๐Ÿ˜‚

Magdalena Slodczyk

I think it's a cool and fun concept, btw I liked the fail, thanks for letting me know, I waited anxiously for it ๐Ÿคญ

Phoebe Grint

But this is so good ๐Ÿฅน. New song with influences from an old one can still be a bop and be released, can it not be?

Brandt

I actually really enjoyed it. Even with the "fail".

Tasha Wright

๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ... This is a vibe I can get behind.

x0_Kristin_0x

My tired brain read this as โ€œKid Laroi/Justin Bieber TRIBUTE songโ€ and I was starting to question both my and Joelโ€™s sanity. ๐Ÿคช

loonylovesgood

Now all I hear is 'juiced, juiced, juiced...' ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Thanks ๐Ÿคฃ

Sigga

Haa haa.. your fail is still better than my attempt at a vocal run...I start to sound like a prepubescent with severe nasal issues! Thanks for sharing it made me smile ๐Ÿ˜Š

Clair (Teampanda)

All I could hear was โ€œjuiced, juiced, juiced, juiced, juiced juice,โ€ which somehow made the whole thing even more absurd in my head. ๐Ÿ˜…

Shannon Kraushaar

Aggressive! It's so upsetting realizing you were being used, especially by someone as close to you as a partner! This song could definitely help someone blow off stream. I could imagine someone in the gym boxing out their frustrations.

Jessistache_73

Needed this today, itโ€™s been a struggle of a day at work. Thank you โค๏ธ

Alle Engdahl

This

Shauna

That vocal fail sounded like me trying to sing lol

Kristin Owens

how bout make this part of the song challenge series, like you jonas and august doing your own versions (rip off) from one famous song? just an idea lol

Jean

Definitely derivative but still a good song. At least you sing the high notes even if you missed one :D

Cas

That's the way I would feel too, like annoying poo poo heads I work with sometimes I feel like saying to them like STFU all the time coz they never really hear me out or what i feel so yeah can relate to this song lol and feeling used part is kinda like what I've been going thru too. Like I'm with these peoples to get used or feeling like I'm just there to be used for them to do their dirty work or something lol and not hearing a word what I say or feel so I'll be like okay u using me so stfu nobody cares lol

CK DeP

Loved the "fail" , it's kinda like you made it on purpose for this experiment, otherwise I absolutely dig it! Yeah even tho it's rough draft I really enjoy it!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŽถ

CK DeP

๐Ÿงข Borrowing Joel's dad hat for a minute. (Not really bc I'm the queen and I don't need it. ๐Ÿ‘ธ)

Dannielle O'Neill

Vocal mishap notwithstanding, the song def has a vibe, lol. The concept is really fun, but can understand if it's not where you wanna go with your music. Thanks for sharing, who knew being told to stfu could feel so palatable XD

Whit-EbullientShrub

I love this even the "fail" lol great job Joel

Lany Stout

Sounds like my feelings at family gatherings with certain ppl in attendance. Just can't w some. ๐Ÿ™„

Dannielle O'Neill

This is a vibe! Kind of liked the fail ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

emy

Love it! This will make a great new lullaby for the kid... I've already been screaming the chorus in my head for years now!

Sugary Magnolia

๐Ÿคฃ

Shauna

๐Ÿ‘ป oOoOoOoo ๐Ÿ‘ป idk that if ever had someone tell me to stfu in song before xp interested to hear what other songs you were planning on doing... even tho you said you've moved on from the concept.

MediocreAtBest

Did you hit puberty at 1:21? ๐Ÿคฃ Very catchy though

Becky Lorion

Thatโ€™s a cool concept! Whatโ€™s making me laugh is the repetitive โ€œshut the f$ck upโ€ ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Aubrey Danielle

Puberty much?

Kelly Williams

๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฅIloveyousomuchithurts

Holly Baker

@dannielle lol ๐Ÿ˜‚

AttacKat

this is funny.. but also... Catchy and a lil more relatable than the original

Airyckah Lane

It's a little bit pitchy ๐Ÿ˜‹

Mari

Laughing your head off?! What a waste of such a great new hair do!๐ŸŒŠ I'll see myself out with my pun. *It does look nice tho.

Dannielle O'Neill


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