The Stepmother (Complete)
Added 2021-11-03 23:24:39 +0000 UTCYay its done! I really hope you all liked this one! I know I'm taking a while to get each part out so I appreciate yall for your patience as always! Next will be The Real Estate Company for sure, and possibly another age progression story if I can get to it.
Tori
Comments
Glad you liked :)
Woke fruit
2021-11-07 05:59:52 +0000 UTCFun little continuation series! I liked the final cap - tied together the last few character arcs well and the last paragraph leaves room for more fun in the future :)
dzstztg
2021-11-06 15:46:32 +0000 UTCYay love to hear it :)
Woke fruit
2021-11-04 02:19:22 +0000 UTCI think this was great. I enjoy the long stories and multiple transformations. Especially enjoyed the beginning when they knew what was happening, but powerless to prevent it. Trisha is a great protagonist and hopefully we see her again down the line. All in all, I think the whole thing was amazing.
Cerial442
2021-11-04 01:32:13 +0000 UTCYour welcome🙂! Edit: Admittedly there was one section mentioning Olivia in the page before the final one that I missed so that last critique may not hold up all that much.
MagicCobra911
2021-11-04 01:29:49 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback :)
Woke fruit
2021-11-04 01:18:14 +0000 UTCWell this was interesting…I’m not gonna lie though it’s not exactly the part 2 I was hoping for. I think it went on a little too long and had too many characters shoe horned in. Also I feel like Olivia got sidelined too much in this I was hoping for a little more elaboration on her state of being in the final page. Still I appreciate the effort on a part 2.
MagicCobra911
2021-11-04 01:08:23 +0000 UTC
