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Chapter 388: A Wyvern’s Limits

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If you dont intend to make them a regular race, with a character Thal interacts with enough to warrant giving the character, and race, a name, then youd eventually want to use the name of the races. However, right now, since Thal doesnt know their races, these descriptive names are fine.

Cmndprmpt

Not giving up eh?

Tragedy

Most of the time Thal won't know what there called, so using something like bird folk is makes sense. Even once he learns their name, he still could refer to them by generic descriptors, just reminding us every now and then what their species is called. Our brains naturally try to put things in a box to simplify things. It makes it easier to read and imagine.

Burkholt

Losing Eagly’s size and maneuverability in the air is probably going to suck after that evolution, but guess he’ll make up for it with more power and durability? Also think he should add some sort of water affinity to round out the storm theme

KDR

TYFTC

DARK LORD DAISHI

as long as you spice it up with unimportant descriptors like the chicken headed one or one with yellow feathers or something to keep it entertaining, no one could have a problem with whatever you call a fantasy race.

Throh_goblin Lord

He is taking so long to beat this army. If only he had an army of his own.

ManguKing

Whatever descriptor he comes up with for the various races is fine. If they look similar to an animal or a green human, that's more likely to repeat in someone's head than a random race name. Unless it's something he recognizes from mythology, like elves and vampires.

Jennifer Leigh

As a general rule, the less times a word is repeated the better it is for the writing. Synonyms are your best friend in my opinion

Axel Fremen

Bird folk is fine imo

Gavin


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