Chapter 346: Shadows Over Zergur
Added 2025-09-22 09:05:01 +0000 UTCComments
El buen servicio secreto, un clásico que toda buena faccion debería tener
DrifterMan
2025-12-11 02:15:35 +0000 UTCTYFTC
DARK LORD DAISHI
2025-10-20 00:33:32 +0000 UTCAs objective you can have "faction with the most survivors." I get that the system itself wants to force a few to become elites, but a whole faction slaughtering other factions and becoming elites as a faction is a great way
ManguKing
2025-09-27 12:42:04 +0000 UTCJust a suggestion: thalion has mostly grown solo thus far, but if he is forced to leave his few allies behind itll just become another repetitive story in which h the mc is alone. Makes it very hard on the author to keep the comedic balance that you have mastered thus far. Please keep things as they are. 50% solo and 50% with his allies.
ManguKing
2025-09-27 12:40:13 +0000 UTCObviously, any main quest needs hidden objectives and rewards for those willing to go above and beyond. So, that's my serious suggestion. A non-serious suggestion i have is that, for whatever reason you find the most humorous, Thalion has an ability that makes the event trivial for him and clean sweeps, potential hidden objectives and all. Except one. Someone in his allies did something he didn't think of and stole one of his secret rewards out from under him. Now, he's got an unserious beef with that person, causing them to compete with one another in a friendly way.
Cmndprmpt
2025-09-22 19:53:31 +0000 UTCNot really useful for this chapter but Thallions “title” as the Blooded Templar is absolutely sick. Couldn’t have come up with something cooler.
Brody L
2025-09-22 17:38:43 +0000 UTCSystem events. The reward should match the challenge. High risk high reward. There should be leader boards in the event . Depending on what the system is, maybe a couple different ones with rewards.
Daniel Hamilton
2025-09-22 14:57:40 +0000 UTCThat commanders pride folded so fast.
Elroy Rigsby-Leday
2025-09-22 13:54:34 +0000 UTCHow about an event where they all go to a land where they have to build a sky ship with a system given blueprint to do a sky treasure hunt. Every one gets to keep the blueprint.
Elroy Rigsby-Leday
2025-09-22 13:49:41 +0000 UTCWhat about the Kharzum Sect, from a few chapters back. They seem kind of morally gray, I even felt sorry for them.
Elroy Rigsby-Leday
2025-09-22 13:47:29 +0000 UTCpersonally want an alien race to just be normal instead hyper hypocritical and evil, want them to be redeemably villainous, only evil because they're against thalion.
Throh_goblin Lord
2025-09-22 11:49:40 +0000 UTCWould be nice if he meets some decently powerful people from other factions who aren't selfcentered, megalomaniacs. #killPeople #makeNewFriends
Atorn Gaming
2025-09-22 11:46:40 +0000 UTCMaybe for the events let's have every group have a personal enemy that's hunting them down according to skill level. Strong enough to genuinely challenge them even god chosen. It will have plenty of advantages and serves as that one enemy you want to avoid at all cost. Like the reaper from persona.
Jailen
2025-09-22 11:31:44 +0000 UTCOh that with beacon is good. Havent thought of something like that in detail.
Johannes Röhrl
2025-09-22 11:06:45 +0000 UTCIt will be kinda like that. I have already introduced some of the major factions. The teams wont be random though. It will be like with the base teleportation in the tutorial. The ones who are staying close to each other will also appear in the system event togehter. But there will be some other cricumstances i cant speak about right now that will make it harder to form big groups.
Johannes Röhrl
2025-09-22 11:00:08 +0000 UTCFor your treasure hunt forcing contestants to go after the same items and once they get it then they have a beacon of sorts alerting everyone and inviting combat. The items could be cards instead of objects to get around the no spatial rings. Or the items could just give them points and then disappear. At the end points could determine score and allow them to purchase something. I'm hoping for a little bit more universe-building and lore. And different flavors of villains or more neutral parties. Most of your bad guys tend to have the same motives while being utterly dickish and egotistical. Not all of them mind you but enough to be a recurring theme. Maybe even factions that want to recruit Thalion. I also agree with the others your work is excellent and that you should do what you want to do.
Burkholt
2025-09-22 10:51:03 +0000 UTCWhat if for a initial stage everyone was set into random teams so we could get a little first person deep lore on the other societies.
Garry Anderson
2025-09-22 10:48:58 +0000 UTCI share the opinions of the others but may I add, I really like treasure hunts for those events. Anyway all hail the endless empire. He shall wipe out anyone in this events how dares to stand against him.
Sleep
2025-09-22 10:35:59 +0000 UTCI trust your intuition. You've written a damn awesome story so far and when you continue doing what you did up to this point, it will continue to be an awesome story. Glory to the endless empire, friend.
Belias Harkonnen
2025-09-22 09:53:09 +0000 UTCHonestly, keep doing your thing. Each arc has been interesting, compelling, and a solid read.
Gavin
2025-09-22 09:18:09 +0000 UTCMan, every non human race are so hypocritical. He claims he wants an honorable duel but turns it into an all out brawl with the very first strike.
Jailen
2025-09-22 09:17:57 +0000 UTC
