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[GL COMIC] EP.02 Uncensored/uncut version

Hope you enjoy these extra lewd panels β™₯ :>

Also, don't worry it's not going to turn into THIS type of story, if you know what I mean LOL! Here is episode 02 finished and PLEASE can you tell me if the BG integration looks weird?? X'D

[GL COMIC] EP.02 Uncensored/uncut version

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Hello Chucklenaut! OMG! Thank you so much for your typo corrections!! I take that with pleasure since English is not my first language I keep making typos here and there uggh πŸ˜–πŸ˜– I'll try to be more careful for next episodes 😊 thank you so much you're a savior lol!! Also very happy you didn't notice it was 3D, it is reassuring ☺️☺️

Heyo! Just wanted to say I’m enjoying the comic and excited to see more! I think the backgrounds look natural! I didn’t realize they were 3D modeled until I saw the post where you mentioned it so I think they’re fitting in well! Not sure if you’re looking for any grammar feedback, but I was going to mention that in the box about her mom stealing the journal from her, you could use β€œstole” instead of β€œstealed” for the past tense of β€œsteal”. Also near the end when she says β€œthere were only one place…” you’d typically use β€œwas” instead of β€œwere” since was is singular and it’s referring to a singular place. Either way, really enjoyed the comic and looking forward to more!


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