Also, don't worry it's not going to turn into THIS type of story, if you know what I mean LOL! Here is episode 02 finished and PLEASE can you tell me if the BG integration looks weird?? X'D
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Hello Chucklenaut! OMG! Thank you so much for your typo corrections!! I take that with pleasure since English is not my first language I keep making typos here and there uggh ππ I'll try to be more careful for next episodes π thank you so much you're a savior lol!! Also very happy you didn't notice it was 3D, it is reassuring βΊοΈβΊοΈ
2022-11-28 15:38:16 +0000 UTC
Heyo! Just wanted to say Iβm enjoying the comic and excited to see more! I think the backgrounds look natural! I didnβt realize they were 3D modeled until I saw the post where you mentioned it so I think theyβre fitting in well!
Not sure if youβre looking for any grammar feedback, but I was going to mention that in the box about her mom stealing the journal from her, you could use βstoleβ instead of βstealedβ for the past tense of βstealβ. Also near the end when she says βthere were only one placeβ¦β youβd typically use βwasβ instead of βwereβ since was is singular and itβs referring to a singular place.
Either way, really enjoyed the comic and looking forward to more!