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Chapter 624: Just the Start

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What happened to blitz ? Did I miss something?

Jon

Im fucking exctied for this!!!!!!

Yaldabaoth

Tyftc Centered text for titles notifications, and status sheets looks much more natural/ like it’s actually us reading the system note rather then just reading the text of the thing.

Jeroen Turkstra

Think you meant faster not slower time dilation for the time prison. For a rate of 1 day origin to 7 days time prison time is moving faster in the time prison

Pickled Rick

Center text works well - different flow lets it stand out more as an 'aside' somewhat.

Ashrothe

Regarding the text centering, I don't mind either way, but would personally prefer them to be in text. Did you know that by using a picture they disappear from the chapter emails we've been getting after you remove the chapters from Patreon before a release? For example, book 8 'Level 250' (chapter 522) now has a bunch of 'the linked image cannot be displayed...' messages instead of the congrats and stats messages from the system when I look at them now. Also, I'm kinda hoping the new system does drop all the old contract details as seeing 'Natalie Savannah via Malorie Stewart' (instead of Malorie Fields) tickles my borderline OCD every time I see it.

Brian Dibbins

Center text was great!

Bryan

Thanks for the chapter!

Arieh Sochaczevski

CENTERED TEXT FOR MY VOTE

Kyle Davis

Slower? “Can… you make it pass slower?” If 2 hour pass on the outside, and only 1 hour pass on the inside, then the inside pass time slower, and you can only do half as mutch? or what is slower/faster refering to? time per time is an odd mesurement..

Puggan Se

Really fun series to read. Glad you put it onto Audible, I mainly listen cause I’m always doing something that keeps my hands busy. Thanks for writing

Immanuel Medina

Centered for sure. Makes it feel more immersive like we’re actually seeing a little blue screen template somewhat 👍🏼

JW Saxby

😭😭 Ended too soon 😅 felt like the scene got cut half way through, I need a more thorough and full rundown of the new notifications, boosts, titles, benefits, stats and such lol ya killing me with the suspense. Tyftc 👍🏼💙🍻

JW Saxby

Thanks for the chapter! Even if you are making us wait for the rest of the new stuff. 😀

John

I like centered. It stands out a bit more. But as another poster said.. whatever is easiest

Shawn Treants

Centered looks good to me, but whatever is easiest for you is the most important choice

Jake Rands

Thank you for the chapter

joel southard

Of course we didn't get the status sheet today 😂 Centered looks a little cleaner but it's not a big deal.

BoonePharm

TYFTC! Centered text 100%!

atmatos

I'm also a fan of the centered text

TDarwin

Centered is the way to go!

Harold

Centered text works. new system, new interface, new format,

sjmcc13

She is stubborn… and probably has a lot of skills to grind

SunriseCV

The centered text for system notifications is good, it really sets it apart from the regular story text and draws your eyes to the change in page format

Michael Storms

I like centered text makes it easy to discern System Info. Excited what chapters will show on Thursday!

Jordan

I like the center better - makes it more recognizable as being 'distinct from normal story'. I also think it would be good to include the three (maybe 5) dashes centered as well

Athias

I was kinda expecting a giant worm to pop out of the sand and try to swallow them... I love that Silvi and Roman said the exact same thing

Kendal Bozant

Thanks for the chapter.

Raymond Mouton

I think the centered version sets it apart better.

vardic d

I like the centered version a little more.

Steven Irvine

I think the centering is good honestly. I feel like a balance of the status itself always being on the side makes sense, while notifications feel far more "Real" if they are front and center. You HAVE to look at them. Fine either way, but food for thought. Perhaps leave it for only truly important updates. Pops more that way.

Owen Kaz

Haha. I think it may be better to keep it how it has been. I don’t think the ebooks have tables now that I think about it, and they center the other system instead… keeping left aligned may help differentiate it and the other systems in ebook form… Though, I do like the cleanness of centered a bit better.

SunriseCV

Goosebumps, man! Can't wait for this new shit. Orodan Wainwright would be very happy with Brandi's suggestion. Good training :)

granndfunk

On the centered text - I honestly don't mind either way. Do whatever works easiest for you. If neither is more difficult than the other, than simply do the one you prefer.

TooOldForThisShit

I didn’t even notice, centered or not

Samuel Strode

Regarding centered or not - entirely down to you, I’ve no preferences either way. So long as the data is there and any tables don’t get screwed by Patreon I’ll be happy

Iron Akela

Tftc

Peter Nugent

Center it

Peter Nugent

For me, it being centered feels weird. I might get over it, but been like that for so long, it feels odd to change suddenly. But I'm more about your story than anything, so change is fine if that's what you want.

Melody Haren Anderson


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