Chapter 894: Mandatory Team Activity
Added 2024-05-06 23:00:04 +0000 UTCThe subterranean border town of Outer Rexion was a ring of lights in the dark. Accommodation anywhere but the back tunnels was expensive by most standards, but gold rank adventurers had standards all of their own. Zara Nareen entered her suite and immediately spotted something different from when she left it. Someone had been in her room, despite explicit instructions to the contrary.
It was a multi-room suite, centred on two chairs and a couch set around a low table. There was something new on the table, but she didn’t concentrate on that for the moment. Distracting her could easily be the plan, setting her up for an attack from behind. Instead, she pushed her magical perception out hard, in clear disregard of propriety.
She sensed no one else in the suite. She felt the agitation of those in the nearby rooms, but they were suppressing their anger. Social norms were all well and good, but no one wanted to bang on the gold-ranker’s door and tell them to stop making a magical racket.
Zara took slow steps forward, looking around. If she couldn’t sense anyone, either no one was there or the person there was very dangerous. She moved to the coffee table for a closer look at what had been left on it: a plate of red and white baked squares. Her shoulders slumped as the tension left her body. She smiled at a memory from half her lifetime ago.
“All these years and you’re still barging in uninvited.”
“I think ‘barged’ is a little harsh,” Jason said as he stepped out of a corner shadow that should not have been able to hide a person. He shrugged off his cloak and it dissolved into nothing. Zara shook her head, picked up one of the slices and delicately bit off a corner. Then she elegantly lowered herself into an armchair as Jason dropped himself into the other like a sack of potatoes.
“I’m a little surprised you’re the first one here,” Jason told her. “I’m also a little surprised you’re still turning your hair and eyes copper.”
A contrite expression crossed his face.
“I had no right to tell you what to do with your body, even if my anger was justified. I’m sorry for that.”
“We both made some bad choices back then. And you would have had to make fewer of them if I hadn’t dragged you into my mess.”
“Those are old stories, and these are new times,” Jason said. “Perhaps it’s time to let all that go. And it does look good on you, although I suspect most things do.”
“Are you flirting with me, Jason?”
“No, I just have eyes. Why are you still wearing a different colour?”
“The sapphire hair is iconic to the royal family. I’m still adopted into House Nareen, and it makes things easier.”
“Still publicly on the outs with the royal family?”
“No. Politics is more changeable than the sea and there has been plenty of time for that to blow over. But I like being part of my mother’s family, and staying there keeps me out of the worst of it. Especially since my cousin became the new Storm King. And my father has become softer since retirement. I was spending time with him in Rimaros when I was sent word you were back. That’s why I’m the first one here.”
They sat back in their armchairs, looking one another over. Neither of them had aged, of course. Zara knew that ranking up had changed little about her appearance, but Jason was a different story. His face had already changed a lot at silver rank, but his strange, nebulous eyes always drew the attention. Now he had the same eyes he had when they met at iron rank; dark, challenging and playful.
“Have your eyes changed back, or are they a disguise, like mine?”
“Just a disguise. How effective it will be, I’m not sure. I’m having trouble containing myself.”
“You always did.”
He flashed that infuriating impish grin. He was more handsome than when they’d met, yet still somewhat plain by gold rank standards. His chin was still somehow too prominent after ranking up no less than four times. It left his face oddly out of balance, yet it suited him perfectly. He always had a way of leaving her off balance as well.
More profound than the physical changes was the way his mental state affected his physicality. Back then he’d been twitchy, wild and energetic, as if he were hopped up on something. His body language was like a rabbit hopping on the spot, unsure whether to play or run away.
Now he was still. Certain. He looked at the world as if, whatever he decided, it was the world that would have to answer. Not many people recognised that look. Most never met a diamond ranker, let alone enough to know that they all had it. Zara was one of the few who did.
“Where did you get the ingredients?” she asked.
“The ingredients?”
“For the gem berry milk nut squares. We’re so far underground that the rock around us would be molten if not for the natural array,” she said. “The bronze rankers here have to wear specialised magic items just to survive.”
“I’m aware.”
“And you’ve been down here for what? A decade and a half?”
“About that.”
“So, where did you get gem berries and milk nuts to make this slice?”
She took another bite, then spoke with her mouth full in distinctly unladylike fashion.
“It tastes exactly the same!”
“That’s because it’s the same batch,” he told her.
She swallowed it all in a gulp, not carefully chewing as she had before.
“You fed me twenty-year-old baked goods?”
He reached for the plate.
“If you don’t want it…”
Jason’s hand was slapped away by a concentrated burst of compressed air that didn’t disturb anything else in the room. He leaned back, his grin somehow becoming even more smug.
“That was some precise wind control.”
“I did do a little practise on the way to gold rank, you know. I hate to break it to you, but time moves on while you’re off having cosmic adventures. The rest of us are living lives.”
She barely caught the flash of sadness before he reached out for the plate again. He took a slice and stuffed half of it in his mouth, waggling his eyebrows at her. But the mask had slipped a little, and didn’t quite fit anymore.
“It must be strange for you,” she said. “You go off and do these amazing things. Walking between worlds. But then you come back and everything has changed on you. Missing the lives of friends. Some girl you met once used your name, landing you in the middle of a political tangle you neither asked for nor deserved.”
“Why did you?” he asked. “I never cared to ask, back then, but why me? Like you said, we only ever met a few times. I’ll grant you, that first time it was memorable, but I was no one back then.”
“Do you really want me to answer that?”
“Should I?”
“No. I complicated things for you the last time you came back. I hope I’ve managed to learn better in all this time.”
She sighed and set her half-eaten slice down on the plate before leaning back and staring at Jason.
“You know I’ve been working with the team in your absence.”
“No you haven’t.”
Her eyebrows rose.
“You haven’t been working with the team, Zara; you’ve been in it. You’ve spent more time working with them than I have, even having scattered since reaching gold rank. You’re as much a part of the group as I am. Maybe even more so.”
Zara took a long breath and let it out slowly as she stared at Jason.
“It took me a long time to feel like I belonged,” she said. “Once I did, I felt an insecurity that maybe it was just in my head. That you would come back and kick me out. I asked to join you once before, and I know the circumstances were different, but I remember how angry you were. The way you looked at me.”
“I wasn’t angry at you, Zara. I was just angry.”
“It felt like you were angry at me.”
“Yeah, well, maybe a bit.”
“I don’t think I ever let go of that fear, not entirely. The way things ended with my last team…”
“Do you mind if I ask about them?”
“Rose retired. She works for the Adventure Society now. Orin is still adventuring. Hit gold rank not that long ago. He’s in a team with Kasper Irios and his friends. He’s—”
“The friend you invoked my name for so he didn’t get stuck marrying you.”
“Yes. Not my finest hour. It turns out my father was already working to… it doesn’t matter. Kasper is an adventurer, now, and Orin is the only one on his team to hit gold so far.”
“Amos Pensinata’s influence?”
“I don’t know. No one’s really seen him since the transformation zone. He was around for a little while, settling the affairs of Orin’s team. Then he just kind of vanished. Some people say he retired, others that he’s working on getting to diamond rank. He clearly wants to be left alone, so I never dug deeper.”
She sighed.
“I still think about my old team a lot. I wasn’t with them for all that long, but it felt like I was building a place to belong. They were a Rimaros team who trained the same way I did. We thought the same, tactically and strategically. It was different with your team.”
“Our team.”
“Our team. Thank you. They were still figuring things out when Sophie recruited me. Losing you, Taika and Rufus all at once left massive gaps in their tactical options. I felt like a stranger trying to fill three holes when I didn’t fit in any of them. They didn’t seem worried because the way they work is so adaptable, but that’s not the way we train in Rimaros. For a long time, I thought I’d made a mistake.”
“But not now.”
“No. When Sophie pulled me in, I felt bereft of purpose. She told me there are worse things you can dedicate a life to than helping people. It’s strange how you can dismiss an idea for seeming so simple and obvious. I’d convinced myself that I had to find something complicated and unexpected to set me on my life path. It’s why I went chasing you.”
“Just that?”
“I’ll ask again: do you really want me to answer that?”
“No,” he said. “Not today. Do you know when the others will get here?”
“Should be in the next few days. Travis will be soon, as he’s still working out of Rimaros. He’s been doing cloud flask research with House de Varco and that diamond ranker who hates you. The others are farther away, mostly Vitesse. Last I heard, Neil was in the Mirror Kingdom with Nik.”
Zara was startled at the smile that lit up Jason’s face.
“How’s my little rabbit guy doing? He must have found a team by now, right?”
“Actually, he’s been working with the Adventure Society. They shop him out for expeditions that could use a communications and coordination specialist. He’s in very high demand, from what I’ve heard.”
“That diamond ranker is going to come here, aren’t they?”
“I suspect so. They didn’t like you dodging them for fifteen years.”
“Are you using non-binary pronouns or did this diamond ranker split themselves into multiple people with magic?”
“Pronouns. High-ranking shape-shifters often switch around their gender. Travis introduced the concept of chosen pronouns and it’s catching on amongst gold and diamond rankers. Apparently. I don’t talk to that many diamond rankers.”
“See, this is favouritism. Knowledge wouldn’t let me go around disseminating ideas from Earth.”
“Only ones you didn’t understand for yourself. You introduced several concepts related to cooking that I did not impede at all.”
Zara looked around the room and saw nothing, but sensed a barely discernible divine aura. She looked to Jason, whose attempt at looking cranky was plainly undercut with amusement.
“Oh, look at this,” he complained to the room. “I’m out of my domain five minutes and already you’re eavesdropping.”
“Are you saying you never used your omniscience within your domain?” Knowledge asked.
“Yeah, well… shut up.”
After some disembodied laughter, the divine aura vanished. Zara stared as he shook his head in amusement, as if nothing out of the ordinary had happened.
“Does that happen often?” she asked.
“You mean gods having a chat?”
“Yes.”
“I dunno. How much is often? I’m in the club now, so I imagine it’ll keep happening.”
“The club?”
“My membership is a bit odd. I’m not a god, obviously, but I’m not entirely… not a god, either.”
“You’re a demigod?”
“It’s more complicated than that. You want to see?”
“See what?”
He didn’t move. He stayed sitting where he was, eyes locked on her. His dark eyes gave way to the orange and blue ones, but there was no other visible change. At the same time, she felt the change, and she instinctively pushed back in her chair. Like a god’s aura, it was vast and connected to some distant force. It was if he had become an unstable portal to some place of incomprehensible power.
And as suddenly as the sensation appeared, it vanished.
“What are you?” she asked breathlessly.
“Complicated. I’ll save the big explanations for when we’re all together. I’ll probably need Clive’s help explaining certain parts anyway.”
“Things are going to get strange, aren’t they?”
“Strange how?” Jason asked with unconvincing innocence.
“You know the Magic Society and Adventure Society are going to be all over you about this System thing.”
“I’m more worried about Clive, to be honest. How excited was he when it happened?”
“It’s probably best you don’t know.”
“That bad, huh?”
“I’m sure he won’t make a big deal of it,” Zara lied.
“I’d run off to the other universe without him, but I’ll need him to set that up.”
“The other universe. Where you’re from.”
“Yeah. I’ll be heading over there in not too long. You’re coming, right?”
“Can I?”
“Honestly, it’s probably not up to you. I’m guessing Hump will make it a mandatory team activity.”
Comments
Honestly one of my favorite endings for a chapter
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
2024-07-21 10:03:56 +0000 UTCThx for the chapter
Kconraw
2024-06-24 19:00:03 +0000 UTCI'm so excited for this next story arc! Jason's finally settling into his new long awaited power and now I'm ready for some fun shenanigans with team biscuit galavanting through the universe!
Chad Hagner
2024-05-15 21:08:58 +0000 UTCReally? 11+ books in you’re not used to the misleading chapter titles yet? They add a dash of mystery, I think. And irritation.
Joanna
2024-05-10 14:05:04 +0000 UTCGotta say, I hope you change this chapter name because it’s misleading - I was expecting him to meet up with his team but nope, it’s just him chatting with a girl. Enjoyable chapter but…I felt disappointed there wasn’t a big team reunion.
ABTelford
2024-05-09 15:31:34 +0000 UTCPatiently waiting...
Fuzzy Wuzzy
2024-05-08 22:35:39 +0000 UTCJoin the club lol. Ive been sayin forever that they feel more like half chapters...but I dont have a patreon to fill up either, so Ive taken to considering each WEEK as a complete chapter rather than three chapters, thats why April was so rough.
Tim
2024-05-08 18:33:08 +0000 UTCIt would be interesting to/funny if Jason showed up there and just claimed the whole thing as the nexus god/astral king/Gab of the system sitter of the rebuilt throne.
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-08 15:56:47 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter.
Jason Ticknor
2024-05-08 06:03:00 +0000 UTCWhy are these chapters so short? 7 pages?! 😭
Douglas Davis
2024-05-08 04:56:13 +0000 UTCI sometimes wonder if Interstus is a highly-passive astral king, or one that has lost their will. Or Jason after some time travel, but weird time shenanigans make all the ways that wouldn’t make sense make sense.
Spencer Miller
2024-05-08 03:17:45 +0000 UTCI think early 20s maybe 24 at most but I can't remember how old she was in book 4 so I might be off
Kalanaere
2024-05-08 00:58:09 +0000 UTCYou have power, but he IS power
Fuzzy Wuzzy
2024-05-08 00:19:20 +0000 UTCAtS?
MrCynical
2024-05-07 23:15:49 +0000 UTCSo is Emi 29 now?
Alex Hoaglund
2024-05-07 22:31:02 +0000 UTCI honestly Love this, i could read a whole book of just chapter like the ones we are getting at the moment.
Hornbach
2024-05-07 22:25:10 +0000 UTCThey are basically the same in every respect, except Dawn is just so much more in every way which is why she has not be humbled to quite the same place as Zara has been. Think about it, nigh perfect celestines who were way outta Jason's league to begin with, both were supremely confident to the point of arrogance, both were humbled/brought back down to earth due to their time with Jason. A relationship with Zara would be a massive retread of what we already got and will probably get again when Dawn reenters the fold.
Iaxys
2024-05-07 21:37:47 +0000 UTCPerfect timing for Shirt to get back into it. PH just finished up a big arc and they’re setting up for the next so it’s at a slow pace. AtS just finished book four so I’m waiting for that next part. So with Shirt starting back to regular posting I’m salivating for the next chapter! And it’s already so good too! So much to look forward to. I just know Jason is going to have some inner turmoil going on because of how he’s changed and how it affects the team both in battle and in societal situations. I’ve always liked the idea of Zara and Jason but I’ve also thought it would be cool if he had like a goddess or a being like himself- but maybe that’s a future thing. You know now that the system is a thing, there’s ample opportunity for a spin off 🤔 or even a story just set in your universe. If you’re open to it I would be down to collaborating on something kind of a James Patterson type deal lol
DirePants
2024-05-07 21:31:46 +0000 UTCMeh. Dawn is an upgrade over Zara in every way.
Iaxys
2024-05-07 21:29:46 +0000 UTCHonestly, for me I don’t mind exactly because we haven’t seen much of her character. I can’t remember what she is like and I imagine she’s changed / grown a fair bit anyways so there will be differences I bet. Should be fun to read whatever happens imo!
Tom C
2024-05-07 20:08:11 +0000 UTCI was let down that it was Zara. She’s one of my least favorite characters and I kind of wish she stopped showing up after the first arc she was in. Looks like she’s not going anywhere though so it’s also kind of good because a lot of people in the comments seem to like her. Still, I was hoping for one of the earlier team members.
Christian Chavez
2024-05-07 19:25:22 +0000 UTCDon't be sad it's ending. Be happy it happened. Also when old adventures end the best result is: The Next Adventure™!
Stephen E Wilson Jr.
2024-05-07 18:36:03 +0000 UTCIdk if I'm ready for this series to end. It feels like we're entering the last Arc.
jeffrey niski
2024-05-07 16:17:20 +0000 UTCJason will bow down before he takes the adventure society with him to earth of all places.
Senseless Myth - Learns
2024-05-07 15:18:28 +0000 UTCI’m mentally making a list of people who may come to earth with Jason and the team. -Rufus’s parents -All the people from earth that came over to pallimustus with Travis & Taika -The priestess of knowledge if she is still dating Travis -Anyone from the adventure society. Would be cool to start a branch on earth -Anyone from the church of Jason. The cultists Jason saved from the trials -Farrah. Is she still traumatized from her last trip to earth? Who else would you like to see come to earth?
BloodStorm
2024-05-07 14:53:19 +0000 UTCWill all the team reunite over there? Or maybe bacK to grEenstone? Would like to see the soul vampire TRASHing some messengers
santiago villa reverte
2024-05-07 14:45:37 +0000 UTCI fully expect Jason to 'conveniently' be too busy to talk to the Diamond ranker about his cloud flask, and then Jason slips away back to Earth before the conversation can happen.
LunarLilith
2024-05-07 12:40:38 +0000 UTCI am excited for Jason to FINALLY meet the diamond ranker that built his cloud flask. I'm excited about a lot of things I know/ suspect are coming our way from Shirt, but that's been a long time coming.
Robert Crocker
2024-05-07 11:59:03 +0000 UTCI really want the Jason-Zara thing to be a thing... ironically since the start of it all.
Jake
2024-05-07 11:52:07 +0000 UTCWe definitely need the intensity to ramp up between these two only to be spoiled by Travis arriving.
Alex Schellenberg
2024-05-07 11:25:23 +0000 UTCI like more zara
Val the mysterious Jedi
2024-05-07 11:13:14 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, but now you’re just stalling. Let’s get to the real first chapter of the volume…
Matt
2024-05-07 10:43:52 +0000 UTCI think the only ranks he hasn't been with are Silver and Gold... not sure tho
Alex Cox
2024-05-07 05:51:48 +0000 UTCIt's gotta be a little weird but he handled that well. Also, I think that having a feature like Jason's chin being so prominent is quite helpful for staying healthy mentally. For me it's my eyebrows.
ouroboros
2024-05-07 05:24:44 +0000 UTCI bet Dominions gonna be completely insufferable about Jasons ascension lmao
Tim
2024-05-07 04:54:00 +0000 UTC"OUR team." Im glad Jason has accepted her...who wants to lay bets on love interests? At first I was thinking Zara would be his go to, but after this, I think Knowledge might actually be in the running now that hes not...not a god.
Tim
2024-05-07 04:40:03 +0000 UTCGlad it was Zara. And also Glad Knowledge showed up. Perfect chapter
Agent P.
2024-05-07 03:13:18 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. I can’t wait until the full team biscuit assembles
BloodStorm
2024-05-07 03:08:36 +0000 UTCI have conversations like this with my friends that I’ve known for over a decade. Things get brought up over and over. Especially the emotionally charged ones.
Nathan
2024-05-07 02:43:05 +0000 UTCTyftc
Edward Grindle
2024-05-07 02:32:03 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter! I'm glad Zara is getting a fair shake and more fleshing out as a character.
Russell Ventimeglia
2024-05-07 02:30:27 +0000 UTCYes Jason totally wants to get it on with Zara and Knowledge
Kalanaere
2024-05-07 02:13:54 +0000 UTCNot to be pedantic, but didn’t Jason and Zara have this conversation in book 10 and 11?? This is like the fourth and fifth time Jason has apologized for making her changer her hair color. Perhaps I’m remembering incorrectly. Perhaps it’s just me being persnickety, but, I recall there being other times something similar happening in each book, a rehashing of certain plot points or conversations in slightly differing contexts. I may need to have a reality check. Any takers?
N8rtotPlayz
2024-05-07 02:09:40 +0000 UTCZara could get some.damn good bragging rights at the least. Yeah I slept with a DemiGod.
Kalanaere
2024-05-07 02:08:31 +0000 UTCI’d say only in the technical sense. I’ve been view his divinity as being his own god. It matches with who he is. He just drops a temple and some holy ground every once in a while and doesn’t notice until it’s stuck there.
Justin
2024-05-07 02:07:21 +0000 UTCAnd Barbecues
Justin
2024-05-07 02:05:50 +0000 UTCClive totally licked the screen
Kalanaere
2024-05-07 02:00:29 +0000 UTCFinally someone else seeing and experiencing the random God chats Jason has and realizing just how crazy it is. I really wish this Chapter was longer though because I feel like Jason and Zara deserve longer to just really sit and chat over 20 year old sandwiches. FYI Jason telling Zara she belonged with the team that she was part of the team was really awesome. She didn't say it outright but that meant a lot to her
Kalanaere
2024-05-07 01:57:33 +0000 UTCNot who I was expecting to be first... interesting. I love the dynamic too. Wait... does this mean Jason will be Earth's first "God"? Oh boy.... Edit: I meant it as a joke. Like "technically" since he will be there and is basically one. He would hate the sentiment but I could sew it being played for laughs among his friends.
Justin Fralin
2024-05-07 01:44:56 +0000 UTCYep. They really should dome aura-melting or whatever its called..
René Blaser
2024-05-07 01:12:14 +0000 UTC"Thas not that Old!" *creaks in Elder Millennial*
Youkai-sama
2024-05-07 01:11:49 +0000 UTCI just want Jason to be worshipped as the God of Sandwiches 🥪
Rhett Sellers
2024-05-07 01:07:36 +0000 UTCAs much as I love Dawn, I honestly think that Jason and Zara make a better match. I feel, in a lot of ways, Zara and Dawn are polar opposites, and Jason is very polarized. They both have something though that really pulls you in. And for me, Zara has that uncertainty that I find more real than Dawn's confidence. Even if Dawn's is Millenia old and perfect, Zara is flawed in a way that makes me love her for being flawed.
Aubrey Listi
2024-05-07 01:07:33 +0000 UTCYou've never had conversations with people that feel that way organically? Because that's more or less how I talk to people in general.
Aubrey Listi
2024-05-07 00:57:49 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this chapter’s vibe. Very fun.
Erik Hyrkas
2024-05-07 00:49:21 +0000 UTCDamn Shirt. You’re so good at story telling! Thanks for another amazing chapter!
Kasey Lindenmayer
2024-05-07 00:41:40 +0000 UTCWait until he finds out what she's like in Jason's party.
Jason Hardman
2024-05-07 00:39:18 +0000 UTCI still hope for Jason and Dawn. Frankly, I’m worried Zara will be fridged.
Erik Hyrkas
2024-05-07 00:34:32 +0000 UTCOkay, this chapter actually solidified something for me that I've been struggling to put my finger on: for awhile now, people in this story talk weird. Specifically, they all talk to each other like they're talking to their therapist. This seems to happen no matter which two characters are interacting. The only exception is when we get to see two mooks have a conversation -- those still sound like normal dialogue, or at least normal dialogue that you'd find in a sitcom. But any named characters we see, they talk to each other in therapy-speak. It's a bit hard to describe succinctly, but if you've been in therapy you probably recognize it. They all seem hyper self-aware of their feelings, the meta reasons for why they're feeling those feelings and how it ties into their past, which they then explain to each other in detail. There's nothing wrong with this some of the time -- who doesn't like self-aware characters? -- but when it happens all the time it begins to feel weird. People don't talk like this in real life. It also makes characters start to sound very similar to each other. Maybe this is just what normal conversations between superhumans sound like, I don't know.
Adrian Gorgey
2024-05-07 00:33:27 +0000 UTCIncredible chapter as always !!
Josh Vanderpool
2024-05-07 00:30:49 +0000 UTCThe will they won't they with Jason and Zara is simultaneously wonderful and unbearable. They are the shippiest ship that ever shipped.
Matt Heineman
2024-05-07 00:30:31 +0000 UTCFeels odd to think that Jason is in his mid 40s as far as age goes.
Crypticorb
2024-05-07 00:27:45 +0000 UTCWe would have a chance to finally meet all the Al's
Mike Zebill
2024-05-07 00:27:01 +0000 UTCI love this story so much! You do an amazing job shirt!
Mark Johnson
2024-05-07 00:26:13 +0000 UTCPlease tell me we get a Humphrey chapter on hump day
frankie doerr
2024-05-07 00:20:54 +0000 UTCI love this goddamn story
Carl
2024-05-07 00:20:42 +0000 UTCTyfc loved it can’t wait to see Clive meet Jason again
gavin knoell
2024-05-07 00:18:21 +0000 UTCMan I ship these two kinda hard. Hope Jason doesn't pull some stupid crap and try to ruin her feelings for him to keep her safe
Austin Wolf
2024-05-07 00:15:54 +0000 UTCMaybe in their language it’s less annoying 🤞🏻
Idan tal
2024-05-07 00:14:18 +0000 UTCI'm just happy to have an excuse to be glad for Mondays again.
james foster
2024-05-07 00:09:48 +0000 UTCFirst rule of the super secret Patreon tier is to not talk about the super secret Patreon tier
Allen Wilding
2024-05-07 00:06:36 +0000 UTCI think you meant salivation?
Sean C Jackson
2024-05-07 00:05:17 +0000 UTCSo many are shipping Jason and Zara. I mean why not …she really knows how to blow 🥳
John Durrett
2024-05-07 00:03:13 +0000 UTCA gold ranker would be the rock or van diesel as a 7 or 8... Jason is like a 5 maybe 6
Chris Pollan
2024-05-07 00:01:55 +0000 UTCTy ty ty... personally, I love Zara... I always felt she was an amazing woman... if it wasn't for Dawn, I'd be rooting for her and Jason, but Dawn is just so perfect a match for him...
Chris Pollan
2024-05-07 00:00:48 +0000 UTCMy biggest peeve...all the rehashing makes it feel like not even a new chapter but half a chapter and thats not even counting word count which already makes the chapters feel small...at least to me, but then it could be a 10k word chapter and it would feel small.
Tim
2024-05-06 23:59:40 +0000 UTCI’d say 50/50, the other gods can keep info from her, but it probably is more in lines what is he willing to share, like some of his astral stuff is probably his to hide now if he wanted.
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-06 23:58:06 +0000 UTCThe team is finally going to visit Earth! :D Excited!
Ty
2024-05-06 23:54:50 +0000 UTCSo on a scale of 1 to 10 how attractive looking is a normal gold ranker? And where does Jason fall on that scale to be considered plain looking?
Daniel S
2024-05-06 23:53:11 +0000 UTCThat was wholesome. Very good job turning the characters into proper, more than less balanced adults!
SmokeJam
2024-05-06 23:53:07 +0000 UTCThanks Shirt!
Aaron Pulver
2024-05-06 23:51:34 +0000 UTCill we're missing now is Dominion and the gang b4 they dip lmao
PapaJohn
2024-05-06 23:51:17 +0000 UTCMy money is the big thing no one is telling Jason about is when the bridge is finished, it's going to trigger the merging of the worlds. Apocalyptic disasters, gods going mad, random diamond rank monsters showing up in low magic zones, followed by a massive messenger invasion since the native unorthodox population will be on the same world as the purity thing.
Michael Fannon
2024-05-06 23:48:45 +0000 UTCOoooh, that would be so mean! I love it
Joanna
2024-05-06 23:44:46 +0000 UTCWho thinks Jason’s gonna trade some authority and let the pallimustus gods use his bridge to be the gods of both worlds?
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-06 23:41:43 +0000 UTCI download the PDFs of new chapters and read them that way, as among other things I can quickly get a sense of how long a chapter is. Shirt writes mostly chapters that are 7 pages long. Rarely one is 10 pages, but they haven't been shorter than 6 pages since I joined this feed 2 years ago. (Has it really been 2 years? Time flies when you're having fun, I guess!). So you can get a sense of the length for yourself that way.
Ligeia
2024-05-06 23:40:48 +0000 UTCDoes Knowledge still have access to Jason’s knowledge by virtue of him being in “her” world. Or does that not apply since he’s now his own universe and isn’t technically there physically?
Connor
2024-05-06 23:40:34 +0000 UTCI hope after the team has a reunion they had over to Rimaros and have a famous Asano Barbecue with some of the other Rimaros characters so we can find out what they've been doing before they head off to Earth.
Greg Danes
2024-05-06 23:39:56 +0000 UTCAgreed
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-06 23:38:56 +0000 UTCCloser does not mean much with gold rank teleportation powers like Clive and Humphrey have.
Scott McCarthy
2024-05-06 23:38:30 +0000 UTCThank you, I love seeing everyone come back slowly.
Harbby
2024-05-06 23:38:30 +0000 UTCThey are all thieves and hooligans now after the magic vault heist lol
Jyhden Bean
2024-05-06 23:38:13 +0000 UTCI really was hoping Nick had his own team
Branden Mccullar
2024-05-06 23:37:51 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter!
Aaron J
2024-05-06 23:37:26 +0000 UTCThose two just need to break a bed already and a wall. Preferably before Neil and or Cassandra show up. Jason doesn't need that head ache.
Ira White
2024-05-06 23:36:52 +0000 UTCThis was a nice glimpse of personal growth and character development for both Jason and Zara. They're definitely more grown up now. I like it.
Catherine Jones
2024-05-06 23:36:41 +0000 UTC1 team member per chapter, stash counts as his own member.
Scott McCarthy
2024-05-06 23:36:36 +0000 UTCIm sorry what our universe just did to theirs...
Landsraad
2024-05-06 23:36:28 +0000 UTCWhere’s Dominion!! We need him
Pierce
2024-05-06 23:36:18 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter.
Brad Gammey
2024-05-06 23:35:19 +0000 UTCNothing like killing vampires for the team to bond over.
Ryan Berends
2024-05-06 23:34:50 +0000 UTCThanks for the wonderful afternoon read!
Alexander Dupree
2024-05-06 23:33:30 +0000 UTCTired: Shipping Jason and Zara Wired: Shipping Jason and Dawn Inspired: Shipping Jason and Knowledge
Shane
2024-05-06 23:31:54 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved this chapter!
James Squibb
2024-05-06 23:29:33 +0000 UTCThey'll cause a natural disaster on earth. Hurricanes cause death and destruction after all
JonO
2024-05-06 23:29:16 +0000 UTC11 hasn't came out yet.... Now I'm dying for book 12.
Donald Spencer
2024-05-06 23:26:59 +0000 UTCGod I love this story. Great chapter too, glad to see Zara doing well.
Snugglebadger
2024-05-06 23:26:53 +0000 UTCI love the new Jason, I can't wait for the full meetup!
Nick
2024-05-06 23:26:19 +0000 UTCI said it about 200 chapters ago when she showed up outside Rimaros, and I’ll say it again: Jason and Hurricane Princess are gonna smash.
Steve Shelden
2024-05-06 23:26:15 +0000 UTCI feel like it's more knowledge flirting with him to be fair
Tempitheadem
2024-05-06 23:25:35 +0000 UTCFuck ya
thomas holder
2024-05-06 23:25:05 +0000 UTCI really hope that when Zara meets the Asano family Jason introduces her as his fiancé. Emi and Erika will eat her alive
mhaj58
2024-05-06 23:24:56 +0000 UTCI don't know why my brain read hippo-crispy, but thanks for the giggle
Patrick
2024-05-06 23:24:40 +0000 UTCI love the moments with the team!!!!
christian grant
2024-05-06 23:23:22 +0000 UTCNow that Jason's "in the club" it's a lot more normal for him to be flirting with Knowledge
Connor
2024-05-06 23:23:15 +0000 UTCInvites her to meet his folks 😉
ReadingObsessed
2024-05-06 23:23:01 +0000 UTCI'm super excited for the mandatory team activity! The awesomeness I'm anticipating is causing so much salivation I've already filled 5 buckets and searching for up to 8 more. I'm sure the experience will be much like shirt said before: "being born while having an orgasm" lol
JonO
2024-05-06 23:22:51 +0000 UTCI would love it if he actually showed up married to that researcher who is obsessed with him.
Michael Fannon
2024-05-06 23:22:39 +0000 UTCWith Zara along for the trip Hump is gunna be so relieved to have someone else good at politics to rein in Jason when they go to earth. The rest are thieves and hooligans.
Adam
2024-05-06 23:22:28 +0000 UTCAh yes, hump haha
Doodlyboy15
2024-05-06 23:22:27 +0000 UTCTime and time again, the fact that Humphrey was made the team leader instead of the MainCharacter™ continues to be a stroke of genius foresight.
Dax
2024-05-06 23:22:16 +0000 UTCIs there something between them?
Charleaux
2024-05-06 23:21:31 +0000 UTCI never expected it to be Zara. But what a trippy conversation.
Zachary Ross
2024-05-06 23:21:09 +0000 UTCDawn is the only one
Justin Smith
2024-05-06 23:21:01 +0000 UTCClive is going to worship Jason for giving him his wife.
Connor
2024-05-06 23:20:59 +0000 UTCAh yes a fine vintage those bale squares.
Loup Garou
2024-05-06 23:20:42 +0000 UTCAll right, since nobody else will say it, I’m going to after almost 6 or seven weeks we finally have real story development again yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!’
Zachary Blevins
2024-05-06 23:20:32 +0000 UTCYou were right. I was think Clive, given his teleport power. And his likely obsession with talking to Jason about the system.
Michael Fannon
2024-05-06 23:20:01 +0000 UTCGood old Jason complications
Gotrek65
2024-05-06 23:19:42 +0000 UTCIs there a super secret Patreon tier I can get that gives me all the chapters even the ones you haven’t written yet? Cause I need it. Lol
Dylan DeBusk
2024-05-06 23:19:17 +0000 UTCMy God, finally getting to his team! This is killing me!
Kristy
2024-05-06 23:18:48 +0000 UTCWell that was basically exactly what I wanted. Zara was my first thought after Vidal, but Vidal isn't an adventurer and wasn't likely to make gold in the time that's passed. Rimaros is closer to Yaresh than anywhere the other team members are and since they split, Zara being there made sense. Rehashing the past, confirming Zara as a team member, some light flirting, a plate of gem berry milk nut squares, and a visit from Knowledge make for an incredible chapter!
Chris Furry
2024-05-06 23:18:43 +0000 UTClol i saw that and wondered is milk misspelled or did he purposefully type fish semen? XD
drink mer
2024-05-06 23:18:37 +0000 UTCTYFTC! Hope the crews back next chapter or at least by next week!
Justin
2024-05-06 23:18:12 +0000 UTCHalf this conversation happened already, so it was very dejavu
Kaladorph
2024-05-06 23:18:12 +0000 UTCIt was amazing but felt so short. I know it was needed like those dying of thirst you give them sips so not to make them sick. Either way thank you shirt!!
Michael Deleon
2024-05-06 23:17:57 +0000 UTCThis was my second least worst choice for who would be there, makes sense. And very well executed.
Jordan Rogers
2024-05-06 23:17:30 +0000 UTCAm I the only one hoping Zara and Jason work out? They seem to balance each other. I can completely see Sophia pushing it, with Humphrey on board as soon as she points out Humpy can start teasing Jason about it. Which he will suck at. Teasing requires subtlety, something dragons lack.
Michael Fannon
2024-05-06 23:17:08 +0000 UTCOhhh sooo good. Best thing to happen to be all day. Zara. And mandatory team meeting....on earth...F. Yeah!!!!
Crystal Donak
2024-05-06 23:16:10 +0000 UTCTftc. Do we really have to wait at least two more days to see the whole team again?? Although I cannot wait to see Clive's beyond-over-the-top joy telling Jason about how thrilled he is to finally have his very own System!
Ligeia
2024-05-06 23:15:42 +0000 UTCWhen does Clive's wife show up? Everyone's looking for her
Rick Delallata
2024-05-06 23:15:31 +0000 UTCyeah ok jason and zara are cute together. They have my blessing which I believe is all thats required on t'interweb these days or its straight to the pitchforks.
Nergie
2024-05-06 23:14:59 +0000 UTCI really hope These two come together.
thelittle158
2024-05-06 23:14:44 +0000 UTCLove the chapter
brian phillips
2024-05-06 23:14:29 +0000 UTCI agree, Knowledge and Jason are great together. ;)
Joshua Morris
2024-05-06 23:14:09 +0000 UTCThat was a sweet chapter.
Jamarr
2024-05-06 23:13:56 +0000 UTCDawn! She’s my favorite love interest for Jason and the one that I feel makes the most sense. But Zara might be a close second!
Ryan
2024-05-06 23:13:51 +0000 UTCThis was the chapter I've been waiting for. The payoff with the team reuniting is going to be sweet.
Sena
2024-05-06 23:13:39 +0000 UTC“I’m sure he won’t make a big deal of it” oh I’m so looking forward to this
morgan
2024-05-06 23:13:38 +0000 UTCGrinning like a fool after reading... wait, I'm always a fool. Just grinning then!
Dirteejack
2024-05-06 23:13:31 +0000 UTCWOOOO! Good to have you back Shirt!
CipherFTW
2024-05-06 23:13:29 +0000 UTCGoddammit I'm torn I love Zara but I also love........shit what's her name again? I swear I hate being terrible with names the Phoenix lady. You know what screw it get with both of them he's immortal and forever is a long damn time
Sylphie
2024-05-06 23:12:58 +0000 UTCNot the first person I expected to arrive but I really liked that scene. New beginnings formed from small moments and earnest intent done well.
mockery jones
2024-05-06 23:12:46 +0000 UTC13th!
Chad .
2024-05-06 23:11:56 +0000 UTCSo many 💕💕💕💕
Richard Bonds
2024-05-06 23:11:51 +0000 UTCThis was a proper reunion. Shipped or not I love them together.
Michael Hawkins
2024-05-06 23:11:42 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter!
Lucas Gulick
2024-05-06 23:11:28 +0000 UTCI had a feeling it was Zara, didn't really make sense for it to be anyone else on the team. I'm glad that Jason made a point to keep calling it our team when she is apart of the team now. Cannot wait to see what happens next and when he finally fixed the link between worlds.
Thomas Black
2024-05-06 23:11:01 +0000 UTCOh I ship those two so hard!
Danny boy
2024-05-06 23:09:59 +0000 UTCThat was a quick chapter! Stoked to see the team get back together!
Hemlock
2024-05-06 23:09:52 +0000 UTCCalled it with Zara being the first!
Cyrus McEnnis
2024-05-06 23:06:45 +0000 UTC"For the gem berry milt nut squares" - milk is misspelled.
Sean Sheldon
2024-05-06 23:03:07 +0000 UTCThank you!!!!
Jason
2024-05-06 23:03:00 +0000 UTCBiscuits!!!!
AfroMocha
2024-05-06 23:02:16 +0000 UTCI love that the first thing Knowledge does is correct Jason on something, followed by calling out his hypocrisy. That's why she's my favorite goddess.
Connor
2024-05-06 23:01:41 +0000 UTCBiscuits Edit: called it, I said it would be Clive, Neil or Zara but I bad a feeling that it would be Zara waiting for him.
Darkdragon
2024-05-06 23:01:29 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Ryan
2024-05-06 23:01:27 +0000 UTC