Heroic Foundation (An Impractical Guide to Godhood ch33 unbetaed)
Added 2025-03-20 14:25:43 +0000 UTCAll right!
As promised a few days ago, I have finished the writing of the current chapter of An Impractical Guide to Godhood, which is the 33rd of the Great Madness (aka the adventures of one Perseus 'the Tyrant' Jackson).
I'm glad to say that my estimates were (for once) rather good, with 'only' 81 pages and 31,000+ words in Word format.
Gloating me? No, I am far above that (satisfied grin).
Hope you will enjoy a lot the reading, since we begin this (insane) Arc 3.
There may be more pleasant surprises before the end of the week.
Bests,
Comments
Well, the powerpoint man is great.
windoverwaves
2025-03-23 17:05:45 +0000 UTCWith Perseus likely golating 'I told you so' before pushing her from the top of a cliff.
Antony444
2025-03-23 16:59:12 +0000 UTCAh, I see you're a man of taste (big grin).
Antony444
2025-03-23 16:58:39 +0000 UTCWell, Emutopia was always trying shit on Kiwiland, so I suppose the rule of the emus can't be an utopia...
windoverwaves
2025-03-23 16:38:29 +0000 UTCYep, a very good sum-up. Thanks for the support!
Antony444
2025-03-23 15:40:49 +0000 UTCNot the whole world is going to be the battlefield...right now. It's more 'how to locate the battlefield when it could be anywhere', for the moment. Perseus, as of right now, doesn't have any Perseus-like visions in his dreams, if that's what you wanted to ask.
Antony444
2025-03-23 15:40:26 +0000 UTCAt the risk of cackling too much, dear patron, it is not going to follow the canon mission this time. But Artemis will be involved, oh yes.
Antony444
2025-03-23 15:38:50 +0000 UTCshe is definitely getting screwed by the SS rescue attempt if she keep being such a pain to everyone.
cake brave
2025-03-23 14:42:34 +0000 UTCMagic is bs and technically they would be 13 by the second book and you could explain it away by saying demi gods hit puberty early
Mickey Pines
2025-03-21 15:18:17 +0000 UTCSo, I have been reading the story again from the start and I had a question. Just how old are the main characters? Because I have been doing the math and something doesn't add up. In fact, most of them seem WAY to young to be having carnal relationships.
Cactuspunch
2025-03-21 14:34:39 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this interlude chapter! While the personal dynamics of the Percy-Bianca-Thalia trio get ironed out, the backdrop is getting set for a new great quest in the near future. If this next quest roughly follows the canon mission like the last two do, Artemis may be screwed by Perseus' "rescue" attempt.
Jace
2025-03-21 10:08:17 +0000 UTCPerseus now has to worry about a whole world being the battlefield and that 100 million most likely spent at high speeds and at very inefficient rates. Nice to see the clear eyed seer available to be recruited. Slightly interested to know if Perseus gets vision from his dream. Still think a Moon goddess is going to gain the domain of folly if she does not get her act together.
Forgottenone
2025-03-20 22:33:26 +0000 UTCA decent transitionary chapter. We got to see hints of what everyone's up to, from Kimiko having become overpowered but also slothful, and the seed of doubt being planted in Grover. Poor Thalia is still trying to feel things out but the position of power she was used to holding in her original world isn't here. And as usually with literally anyone who argues with Perseus, she ended up coming out of that looking a bit like a whiny baby. Just once I'd like to see someone get the upper hand in a verbal fight against Perseus who wasn't also his superior in strength several times over. Oh, and it had nothing to do with romance, because that has caught him off guard a few times.
Benjamin Mages
2025-03-20 15:48:53 +0000 UTC
