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This is not a teaser...24 January 2023

Because you asked for them...this is not a teaser, and there is absolutely no scene on the capital of a certain world important for humanity as a whole.

You have been warned....

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Warmistress is really playing on the word of 'ah, ah, I will just make the female version of Warmaster!'. And besides, assuming it 'works' (which is far from certain) it means you can only place women at this post...which would not please at all the ambitious male officers.

Antony444

Re-read this teaser and a few more thoughts pop to mind: Artemis: Why not give her the title of Warmistress? It's only 2 letters off from Webmistress, and everyone know that's the best title of all. Note: Only the Warmaster title is subject to corruption from what said, so changing it to the female version is pretty much a direct in-your-face challenge to Abaddon. Yes, I know that Star Marshall is what will eventually get used, but, for Taylor it seems appropriate - the other parahumans who experienced Skitter would be probably "no duh, that's really her core identity". Also, even though I don't like Sophia Hess as a character, I'm wondering if she's going to show up in this chapter. I can easily see her becoming the founder of the UmbralShroud Temple - specializing in the blade no one sees coming (literally). Or I could see her being assigned as Taylor's personal assassin - some of the Inquisition have one, so why not Taylor?

Never Mind

Another amusing Xerxes Vandire tantrum. When it comes time for Ormuz's court martial, I wonder if things can be arranged such that even if he's declared "not guilty" because of the interference by the Space Marines in the chain of command, but still gets "defrocked" for incompetence/cowardice.

Thiemo Guenther

Poor Joost indeed... Possible typo: "Samson Pitt had given him the Grand Sea of the Chancellor"- should that be "Grand Seat"?

Thiemo Guenther


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