Triumphant

The supply of popcorn is difficult to find in hell, but to the valiant hearts, nothing is impossible!

Antony444

Great update, only complain is that I found Bianca to be a bit underwhelming for who she is suppose to be. I get she was working under very constraining restrains but I share Percy's disappointment. Now I wonder if Percy os gonna summon popcorn, he already has drinks and recordings going.

Guilherme Bezerra

One tries, one tries...thanks!

Antony444

Thanks a lot for the compliments!

Antony444

I've been really enjoying reading each additional chapter every time you upload! It's a really great concept; taking something and expanding onto it into something original, I love the twists and turns that I don't expect, and especially the humorous tone you've set on your story. Percy is just so, idk the word for it, but he always has something up his sleeve and that always makes a hilarious situation and I'm rambling but to summarize I really enjoy reading your stories and yea. Great update!

Just finished reading it last night and my word, that Percy really is the master of the well timed comment isn't he? Great work as ever Antony.

Dominic

Yep. Still Hades has pretty much an infinite workforce of skeletons to repair everything, and he's the richest God of the Pantheon, so...well, he isn't exactly jumping in joy at the idea of paying, but he can. Many divinities wouldn't be able to. Getting the heroes out of the room? But where would be the fun in that?

Antony444

I will certainly try my best, but I can't promise it.

Antony444

Loved it for the most part, but the bit with the harpies was just cringe, tbh, and I don't think there's a really great way to address it after the fact in story. Unsolicited advice, but I'd rework it entirely or just ditch it before this goes out more widely.

primus

Do not forget Hades is going to try and hand off the repair bill for all the damages to his realm. Still, Goddess of spring should have not accepted Hera's help getting free. Percy was correct about what could happen to her. Now the real kicker is how fast they get the "heroes" out of the room. I see Percy throwing a scroll he got from a pink party member just at the "right" time. That and maybe snatching the master bolt, then acting as a loyal lackey handing it over to Zeus, all the while hammering up Zeus. Then asking what the reward is for turning it in.

Forgottenone

awesome chapter and great fight scenes, that Dacota scene oh god I died. and unrelated is the release for the story always gonna be one chapter a month?

Orion _1M

Yes, there is poor Dakota...and everyone else. There's going to be vigorous arguing, Gods blaming each other, and a lot of very funny things...

Antony444

Hah, that was an enjoyable chapter! The chaos Percy has unleashed is going to be amazing in the next chapter. Hmm, pity we didn't get more of the belligerent antagonism/tension between Percy and Annabeth, but hopefully, it comes soon. And then there is poor Dakota.

Bel