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Added 2024-04-24 03:26:02 +0000 UTCAlya: what if marinette is lying?
Ladybug's visage which is always present in her mind at all times, talking to her like a force ghost: listen here-
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Go Alya! God, it was heartbreaking seeing Marinette backtrack like that. You do such a good job portraying a legitimately two-sided conflict, where both parties have personal baggage affecting and distorting their views of reality, rather than the obnoxious righteousness we see so often in salt fics. Marinette is so scared, not just of being hurt again, but of getting other people hurt again. It's painful and heartbreaking and it is such a relief to see Alya not letting herself be sucked into it! And I agree with Mr. F, your use of colors is so completely masterful! But man, the next update is going to be a heartbreaker, I can tell. In more ways than one...
PA2
2024-04-24 13:24:29 +0000 UTCOh god just the hint at adrien and kagami's talk is ouch
Hyo Dragon
2024-04-24 09:05:49 +0000 UTC
