Been rewriting some stuff. + All chapters in PDF and EPUB
Added 2025-08-20 04:22:50 +0000 UTCEdit: added the deleted chapters in epub and pdf in case someone wants them.
Been rewriting some stuff. It's nothing groundbreaking or anything, so no need to reread, just some things that bugged me for quite a while.
I'll be leaving the PDF and Epub with all the chapters and the changes in here:
Ch1:
-defined Amy's personality a little better
-changed some paragraphs at the beginning
-extended a little bit the goddess small opsie
Ch2:
-Some changes to the start
-Libris' personality at the beginning and their meeting
-Shifted Amy’s personality slightly
Deleted chapters 24 and 25
Ch 25 (27 previously):
-Lain now cleans blood
And other very small stuff
Comments
Mm, dunno how that would actually work, because at that point might as well not delete them at all. But if what you want is having them, they still in this patreon, below. Actually, imma just edit the post to include them
Ibrahim CM
2025-08-20 21:02:00 +0000 UTCInstead of deleting 24/25, you could have them as "bonus chapters" that can be skipped if people want or something.
Rose Bouquet
2025-08-20 19:45:17 +0000 UTCGuess i'll read it again :^)
Gunstolfo
2025-08-20 14:35:33 +0000 UTC
