Enna Story Ch 2
Added 2022-07-04 02:01:21 +0000 UTCIt's been like 2 years since the first one but I decided to attempt working with my original idea for it. Planning some more. Actual banter/"worldbuilding" potential changes from the reality bending. But first thing I wanted to do was resolutely establish Enna's relationship despite the change lol. Gimme feedback on what I have so far.
Comments
Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback on stuff like this. Hoping to fit in some good dialogue and worldbuilding next chapter I write!
Franktonius
2022-07-06 00:07:25 +0000 UTCI am so happy you wrote another chapter. It’s very well written. You did a very good job with the dialogue. I would really love to see more of the world.
Christopher Bartz
2022-07-05 23:44:36 +0000 UTCTy! I always feel unsure when it comes to writing, since I don't do it a lot. Balancing description and pacing lmao.
Franktonius
2022-07-05 17:41:58 +0000 UTCLove it, really good stuff. You really helped paint a picture with how descriptive you were about it.
Symbiobro
2022-07-05 05:44:34 +0000 UTC
