Bonus!

From the story I’m working on called “Firsts”

This is a scene where the protagonists crush, Kaitlynn, comes into his tent. She sees him in his underwear cooling off and without asking, she kneels next to him and pulls down his briefs like a mother simply changing her baby’s clothes. She looks at him like some kind of lab specimen, observing without much expression. Jacob, the protagonist, is shocked but doesn‘t turn down his crush’s boldness, though he never would have assumed this person, who was nearly perfect in his mind, would do something so abrupt and lewd.

She gets up to go after fondling him for a bit, flopping around the stiffening member and observing rising action. The whole instance probably only took about a minute before she seemingly lost interest but Jacob, felling a bit used, called after her;

”Hey! Is that all? I mean… What about me?” 

Kaitlynn looked surprised and stood in the tent doorway, debating some unknown factors in her mind. Without a word, she turned and smiled at Jacob nervously.

”Right… I guess that’s fair.” She said, sitting next to Jacob. Kaitlynn removed her pants revealing a pair of pale panties and layed down in the same position he was in when she suddenly intruded. It was apparent she was waiting for him to make the same bold moves as she had, just switching places. Still Jacob had that gentlemanly side of him that couldn't go any further without permission, despite his deepening anticipation.

”May I see it?” He asked. Kaitlynn only nodded and didn’t meet his eyes. It was like it pained her somehow or perhaps embarrassed her. Given the okay. Jacob went for it. Her body was limp but willing as he slowly removed the fabric, revealing each inch in glorious detail. Jacob couldn't believe his present situation. He couldn’t have dreamed that the girl he crushed over all of high school was letting him reveal her most intimate parts.

The panties were off and Jacob could feel his heart beat inside his head. He touched the lips tenderly along the crease but stopped as Kaitlynn jolted.
Jacob apologized but Kaitlynn didn’t actually seem to mind. She just nodded each time Jacob asked to do something. He moved her shirt to her tight belly until it came off. Her bra too. He couldn't help but feel like this was objectifying her with how little she said and how much he was just staring in awe of her lovely nakedness, but this was her preference and he would respect that. Like a monkey with a cellphone, he caressed explored her.