The Great O's Hypnosis Show Updates

Time for some news!

So first things first, I've been loving all the feedback & even criticism I've been getting for the experience so far because to me as long as you're giving back your thoughts that means you care about the work and believe it can become even better. At the end of the day that's what everyone wants!

That being said the number one issue has been (mostly) fixed! The experience is now mobile friendly! That's right, you can now enjoy the show in the palm of your hands!

That brings us to the second point that I'm currently working on. Which is beautifying the text much more to make it easier to read by properly paragraphing & fixing spelling  as well as grammar issue which will help minimize any problems in regards of text space. Along with reworking some parts by adding more details or getting rid of useless information to make the experience as immersive and enticing as possible!

Finally, the third point; future work & what I plan to do.  I'm currently brainstorming adding at least 2 or 3 more suggestions to the story as a start but I'd love to hear your thoughts on what you'd like to see in the show? It can be anything from just adding a certain word that just *hits you* or it can be a new path completely that I can work on. I'd love to hear your thoughts and let me know what suggestions would you like to see!

There you have it folks, what I've been doing, what I am doing & what I will be doing. I'm so excited to publish more and add more to the experience; it's gonna be amazing!

Update #1:

The Volunteer path is done!

I've finally completed the rework of the Volunteer Path of the experience. It is truly a completely different experience now with the design & the approach I took with this path.

I'm sure you'll love it!

Let me know how it goes and as always in case of any issues or bugs you discover I appreciate you telling me

I'll be working on the other path in the coming days and once it's done you'll be the first to know here!

Update #2:

The Non Volunteer path is done!

Finally completed the rework, formatting and editing of the non volunteer and that has transformed it into a much in depth and immersive experience than it already was!

Check it out and let me know in case you discover and bugs, issues or spelling mistakes (I'm only human haha) 

Next up & finally I'll be working on adding a couple of new suggestions and giving you more options to what you can experience.

Keep an eye out for that!