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Sean Oswald
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Exploration- Chapter 42

Well as often happens, this chapter got a bit longer than expected, but I decided not to split it.
Things are heating up and its about time to start shaping some metal.

About 8300 words for the day. I'm still thinking that I'll do another chapter, but gonna take a break for a bit so probably won't be till late.

Chapter 42- Design Phase

I leaned over the drafting table and started sketching, charcoal moving in confident strokes as the shape of the golem took form. Twelve feet tall meant proportions mattered more than brute mass. Too much weight in the torso and the joints would shear under motion, too little and the core would lack stability. My old DM would be proud of how much nerd lore I retained from D&D because I was definitely borrowing heavily.

This was different than any of my other designs up to this point. They had all included space and the structure had form. My armor was a matter of layers put together. When I drew a design for a building, I had to account for the internal space and optimize that while still making it strong enough on the outside.

None of that mattered here. All that mattered was that I get a humanoid form with the right proportions so that the weight would be distributed properly. A golem didn’t wear armor to protect itself, it’s body was it’s own protection. Obviously, I had to assume that the magic was going to do a lot of the hard work because as strong as iron was, it would have been like warm butter before Wayfinder. If these golems were truly going to be a legendary tier creation they would have to be stronger than that.

As I worked, I kept one part of my mind tuned to the forge. Spot adjusted heat levels automatically as I made notes, the temperature shifting in precise increments that told me it was tracking my intent rather than waiting for explicit commands. That alone was impressive. I’d worked with automated forges before, but this felt closer to collaboration than tooling. The dungeon had provided the heat and space I’d need. Now it was up to me to finish the vision of this.

I leaned over the drafting table and kept sketching, charcoal smudging my fingers as I erased and redrew the same silhouette for the fifth time. Twelve feet was tall enough to be imposing without becoming unwieldy, but every inch mattered when you were dealing with that much iron. I wasn’t trying to engineer joints or clever mechanisms. The magic would handle movement. My job was to give it a body that wouldn’t fight itself once it stood up.

I forced myself to stop thinking like a machinist. Iron in this context wasn’t steel beams and bolts, it was closer to Play Doh that remembered from childhood. If I tried to design articulated knees or rotating shoulders, I’d just be giving stress points somewhere to form. A golem didn’t need efficiency of motion the way a mortal did. It needed balance, mass, and inevitability.

There was this absent thought in me where I wished that I could design it like a T2 with liquid metal. That was just a dream though. This was a blunt instrument and there was nothing wrong with that. Maybe if it ever evolved to mithril, that would become possible.

I redrew the torso thicker, then thinner, testing how the weight would settle if it leaned forward or twisted at the waist. Too much mass up top and it would topple under sudden movement. Too little and the core would lack presence, the kind of physical authority that made enemies hesitate before they ever struck. I caught myself smiling at that thought. Presence mattered, even for constructs.

The arms were next, long and heavy, but not oversized. I wanted reach without turning them into anchors that would drag the body off balance. Hands stayed simple, broad palms with thick fingers, more suited to crushing and grappling than delicate work. Even with that though, I made sure to add as much extra mass as I felt would work to the hands. They were weapons after all and hitting harder required more mass. I just had to be careful not to throw the balance off. Not matter what the magic did, it would still be limited by my design.

I moved on to the legs, spending more time there than anywhere else. They needed to be pillars, not springs, able to absorb force without transmitting it upward into the torso. I widened the hips slightly and lowered the center of gravity until the stance felt grounded even on paper. When I imagined it moving, the image finally stopped wobbling in my mind. Finally, I added more mass to the feet, because just as with the hands, they too were weapons as much as a method of movement.

Once the physical form started to settle, my thoughts drifted toward runes almost against my will. Rune smithing wasn’t something I could ignore anymore. I didn’t want glowing symbols etched across the surface like decoration. That would be obvious and brittle. What I wanted were embedded strings, rune paths laid through the body like veins, reinforcing structure and giving power a place to flow. I knew that we were in Tad’s realm and that his type of enchanting was different from mine, but I wanted this golem to end up being a blend of both.

I kept sketching, but the silhouette wasn’t the problem anymore. The body shape had settled into something that felt stable in my mind, and now the real work began. I started drawing rune chains over and through the form, not as decoration, but as pathways, the way nerves and veins carried signals and strength through living bodies. Each line mattered, because each rune implied a behavior, a bias, and a cost.

My first instinct was to lean into reinforcement. I drew a spine of linked runes down the back, then branched it into the shoulders and hips, imagining the magic distributing impact the way force constructs did when they took a blow and bled it into harmless angles. That felt safe, but it also felt passive. A golem that only endured would eventually be buried under enough pressure, especially if it had to stand against awakened enemies who knew how to break things. I needed something that could endure and still push back.

I tried a second arrangement focused on momentum and kinetic return. The concept was simple enough, take the force that hit the golem and feed part of it back into its next motion, turning defense into offense. On paper it looked elegant, but when I followed the rune flow in my mind, I could see the failure point. Too much feedback and it would become unstable, amplifying impacts until joints and structure tore themselves apart. The last thing I wanted was a twelve-foot iron bomb with legs.

I erased that and went smaller. Instead of one grand network, I designed local chains, clusters of runes embedded in key mass points. Hands, forearms, shins, chest, and the thick ridge of the back. Each cluster would reinforce that section and help it accept strain without spreading it in unpredictable ways. That approach felt more like how I designed things back home, modular and adaptable. There was still the question about how compatible they would be. I didn’t know if runes here would only end up being etched tattoos of if they would carry actual magical power.  

As I worked, I kept coming back to the same principle. The golem body was iron, but the thing that would make it legendary wasn’t the metal. It would be the interactions between the control disc, the dungeon’s animation process, Tad’s authority, and whatever rune framework I provided. If I designed runes that fought the disc’s logic, I’d create friction. If I designed runes that guided and supported, the golem might become something far more than a walking statue.

I spent a long time testing chains that enhanced sensory input. Not perception in a living sense, but detection of force, heat, and magical pressure. A golem didn’t need to see. It needed to react when something struck it from behind, or when an aura tried to suppress it, or when a spell attempted to bind it. I sketched runes that would translate external pressure into internal instruction, the equivalent of reflex. That made me grin because it was exactly the kind of solution I’d have mocked as overthinking a year ago.

The next set was about durability and endurance, but I pushed it beyond simple reinforcement. If the golem could evolve to mithril and then adamantium, then its internal framework needed to survive those transitions. I designed the rune chains with deliberate slack, not as weakness but as room for growth, as if the runes themselves could widen and settle into the new material. I wasn’t sure if that was possible, but the logic of it felt right. Growth was the theme of this entire world, and fighting it would be foolish.

I tore two sheets out of the notebook and started over when the design became too busy. That had been my biggest weakness as a planner. I liked options, liked redundancy, liked covering every angle. In combat that often saved me. In crafting, too many moving parts meant too many failure points.

The third full draft was cleaner. A primary reinforcement chain ran through spine, hips, and shoulders, while secondary clusters in limbs handled impact and load. A third layer, thinner and more conceptual, was built around stability, keeping the golem’s internal flow from becoming chaotic when magic pressure surged. It didn’t feel flashy. It felt inevitable, like this was how it had always been meant to be.

I sat back and stared at it for a long moment, letting my mind run the pattern again and again. I imagined the golem moving, taking hits, pushing forward, and I watched for places where the rune flow would snag or loop or amplify in the wrong direction. The design held in my head without wobbling. That was the first time it had felt that way.

Once I was satisfied, I set the charcoal down and rubbed at my eyes. My hands were stained black, and my shoulders ached from being hunched over the table for so long. The irony wasn’t lost on me that I’d fought gods and ascendants and survived, then ended up exhausted by drawing lines on paper. Still, if we were going to do this, I wanted it done right.

I let the charcoal rest and wiped my hands on a rag before reaching for one of the iron golem control discs. It felt heavier than it should have for its size, not in simple mass but in implication. I turned it over slowly in my palm, half-expecting to feel the familiar thrum of spiritual energy that so many artifacts carried. There was nothing, no resonance, no warmth, and no sense of intent pressing back at me. I knew it worked on different principles of magic than I was accustomed to, but I still believed I could figure it out.

That absence made me slow down rather than relax. I extended my senses carefully, the same way I did when examining an unfamiliar spell or system interface. Spirit Sight showed nothing at all, no glow, no tether, no nascent soul waiting to be shaped or awakened. That made is clear that this wasn’t an item that was enchanted based upon the rules of the Fey System. All of the enchantments, I’d encountered here so far had been anchored by spiritual energy, what Tad called sprites. Those flashes of color I was always seeing.

I shifted my focus away from spirit and toward structure, and that was when things began to click. The disc wasn’t empty, it was dense with complexity, but the complexity wasn’t magical in flavor. It was patterned, layered, and precise in a way that reminded me more of code than spellwork, logic folded into logic with contingencies waiting for the right conditions. I followed those internal pathways carefully, resisting the urge to push too hard, and realized they only made sense if the golem body itself was part of the equation.

The disc wasn’t a power source. It was an operating system.

That realization sent a chill through me, equal parts excitement and caution. This thing wasn’t meant to animate something abstract or half-formed. It was designed to slot into a completed body but this disc alone wouldn’t enchant the golem. That was still going to be up to Tad and me. Now, though, I needed to better understand what this was.

I didn’t try to dismantle it, even though the temptation was there. This wasn’t something to take apart out of curiosity, and I knew better than to treat it like a spell I could brute-force my way through. Instead, I focused on understanding its intent and how it would interact with the design I’d drawn up. If the body was balanced correctly and the rune paths I planned didn’t interfere with its logic, then activating this wouldn’t be a gamble.

I pushed with System Sight to see if I could get any sense and got back nothing. I growled under my breath. I felt so close to understanding this, perhaps even gaining a deeper understanding of magic. The thought came to my mind again. All energy was energy and it simply existed in different forms. Mana, life force, XP, vitae, probably even Psi, it was all the same, although, I hadn’t quite figured out that last one.

So this shouldn’t be beyond me. I leaned harder into my Architect occupation even though this wasn’t the Heavens. Surely there was something I could do. My mind beat itself against the form of the disc like a battering ram. I was not going to be denied. This was something I wanted.

Error… you are attempting to use inapplicable skills, System Mediator.

That was it. I practically screamed with my mind, “Fine then mediate with me.”

For a moment, I thought nothing was going to come of it, but then I felt another presence. It was like being looked at by that Catholic nun with the ruler, even if I’d never been to a Catholic school. Whoever this was, they were looking at me and weighing me.

“How interesting, System Mediator. We haven’t had one of you during my reign, or my mother’s before me. In fact, I don’t know how long it’s been, but you intrigue me. You’ve been around my grandson.”

The words as much as the self-assurance in the words told me that I was dealing with a fey queen. This was a goddess as far as I understood the system and my most recent dealing with a goddess hadn’t been very good. I wondered if the Ways would intervene to help me if one of the queens tried to attack me.

“I have, but don’t think you can get to him through me. I rather like Tad and am lending him the aid that I can, but it isn’t my place to speak for him. On the other hand, I can speak for the Heavens as an Architect and I can make deals. So why are you responding to me?”

“Someone with your authority has been on our radar since you entered our realm. It’s quite quaint the way your system uses mortals to design new paths of growth.”

“As far as I know the only other Architect is a goddess and she’s not exactly a fan of mine. So perhaps being an architect at my level isn’t exactly the way things are supposed to work.”

“Oh don’t speak so lightly of yourself. You are clearly a fulcrum for fate. What remains to be seen is if you can help me with my biggest problem. As for Gallarosa, I’ve never met her. The Fey System is stable and has very little interaction with other systems.”

“As I said, I’m not going to turn Tad over to you, if he wants to reunite with his family that will be his decision.”

“No, no, Mediator. As important as regaining my son’s child is, I have a bigger problem. Although it occurs to me that we haven’t been properly introduced. I am Queen Simari of the Void Court.”

When she stopped speaking in my head, I took that as my cue to introduce myself. There was a reflexive desire to bow just because my parents had taught me manners, but I caught myself in time. It would have been silly to bow to someone who wasn’t physically there. “I am Silas Renner Kalestian, Forerunner, Architect of the System, System Mediator, Duke of Hell, and a Heretical Trailblazer of the Fused Path.” I knew I was laying it on a bit thick, but went with my instincts.

“My, my, that’s quite a mouthful. I also see that you’ve already gained some insights into the Fey system and that you doubtlessly want to gain a piece of our realm for your Fused Path. Yes, I can sense a bit of the primordial in you although it seems to be sealed. You should know that Tad won’t be able to give you a class. He has been extended a certain amount of privilege but granting such a thing to someone such as you will only come directly from a queen.”

“Or the Ways?”

The was a moment of hesitation before she answered, not much, but enough to convince me that she didn’t know about what I’d been offered. “No, not even the Ways, although I suppose they could give you other things. I’m beginning to wonder how random it was that you ended up here. Perhaps we have allowed things to go too stagnant.”

She said the last as though she were speaking to herself rather than me. I could sense the difference but didn’t believe for an instant that any word which came out of her mouth was accidental. There were too many fairy tales about those who made poor bargains with fey.

“Then if it isn’t Tad that you want, you must want my help with the Order.”

“Well you got it in one. I propose a temporary agreement. I will allow you to extend whatever ability it is that allows you to see the underpinnings of your system to the Fey System as well for say 7 days. In exchange you must agree to help rid Basetown of the Order. I’m not going to ask you for a task that’s beyond your capability. And in turn, if you do so, then I’ll grant you a class and a proper connection to the Fey System.”

I thought about her offer. We were intending to help Tad anyway. If the boon was only for 7 days then she must have realized that things were going to come to a head before that point. I didn’t see any trap in what she’d said, although sometimes I could be blind. The clock was ticking though. “I’ll agree to that with one change. I need my connection to the Fey System to be approved by all three courts.”

“Oh, such a smart boy. I do like them like you. If you ever tire of the struggles of a Forerunner, I could find a place for you in my court. Humans aren’t typically welcome, but perhaps that was an oversight on our part. And in truth, you’re so much more than a human now. I could even help you open your primordial nature. Would you like that?”

I felt like I was being baited so I simply said, “Do we have a deal?”

Rather than getting a response from her I got a notification.

New Quest- Clear the Order out of Basetown.

Difficulty: Extreme

Reward: A connection to the Fey System, details to be negotiated

Status of remaining Order members: Arbiter- 1 of 1, Infiltrators 23 of /23, Dreadnought 65 of 68, Law Wardens 19 of 20, Light Seers 2 of 2, Truth Flames 10 of 10, Law Speakers 14 of 26, Law Keepers 184 of 240.

As soon as I got the notification, I felt a buzzing behind my eyes. I could see so much more in this realm now. I might not have the ability to modify it… yet, but I could see more of the rules of this system. The disc suddenly made sense. It was a true artifact but had been created incomplete without the sprites necessary to empower it. I understood the code of it so much more now. Better than anything, I now had a clear vision for how we would animate the golem.

Now, all I had to do was grab a quick nap before the iron got here. Once that happened, I was sure that neither Tad nor I would be willing to delay any further.

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Skill Gains Not Otherwise Mentioned:

Design: 315 >> 322

Programming: 271 >> 275

Rune Smithing: 283 >> 290

Drawing: 58 >> 64

Comments

I think he's wary of the consequences of unlocking his aspect as the Trailblazer. If we consider that Primordials are "supposed" to be a concept rather than a person then it's rational to consider how becoming the Trailblazer aspect as a mortal might detriment his identity as Silas in favor of the Trailblazer. I'd anticipate he'll focus on unlocking it more once he reaches ascendant tier and is better able to balance himself against it... but it's quite likely he won't fully unlock it until he reaches (perhaps as he reaches) the divine tier. My 2 cents.

David Brewer

GREAT chapter but the one thing I don’t understand is why Silas didn’t agree that assistance with his primordial nature would be nice. Yes he felt baited and fey are notorious tricksters… maybe I’m just gullible.

Christopher Reyes Diaz

It makes sense. As the Void Queen she's most likely quite capable of at least peeking even if the Ways is maintaining a "non-intervention" zone for Aerth... just like how her son is trying to literally sneak onto Aerth. And it's also possible that talking to Silas made it easier for her to spy.

David Brewer

I freely admit. When Tad’s gram popped in, I gave a mad, gleeful cackle of laughter. Then I took a break and went for a sammich, before I dug in further. Er…and I just remembered the pizza I was planning to toss into the oven. Ah well. This is excellent stuff. And at least now SHE shoukd know exactly how many of the Order are hanging around. Thanks! Time for a reread!

Jeff McCulley


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