From Pa to Playmate ch6 pt1
Added 2025-10-10 17:50:28 +0000 UTCYay! I made some actual progress! Praise me! Praise me and tell me all about the minor speling mistakes I made! For real though I'd really appreciate your thoughts.
Comments
your feelings are completely correct.
Ehiro
2025-10-10 18:56:20 +0000 UTCWhy do I feel some slight racism from the teacher? Like she's implying that Cadence as a white girl would have troubles fit into the 'black family'...
Lottie
2025-10-10 18:49:04 +0000 UTCthis chapter is mostly for introducing the friends
Ehiro
2025-10-10 18:17:01 +0000 UTCPersonally! I like the models and characters. Great job. 👍 Story direction wise Its naturally going. Lol. Things are progressing towards the normal outcomes i guessed. Is it more mundane, lackluster and well...low stakes. Yeah. And thats fine. Nick is becoming Candace for everyone around her and herself, thus...the plot ....falls into....zero motivation. (For me, haha) Kinda hard to follow a main character and cast that gave up after a month. Snarky aside. The background, models, characters are all pretty fine. Story is okay now. Excitement dimmed. Your hard work absolutely worth it. Good job Ehiro!
Rubyinabox
2025-10-10 18:09:22 +0000 UTC
