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A Semblance of Emotion 060

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...uh huh, riiiight. So Jaune's pelvis is soon to be a fine dust. Okie dokie.

Huanghou

Man I forgot how Nora can be at times. lol

Eggroll 08

Nora is 100% going to throw an orgy at some point. RWBY, Pyrrha, Velvet, The Twins, Glynda, and of course herself.

DrknssRules1

Jaune learns that an unattended Nora leads to pelvis breaking SnuSnu. If he survives that, he will, then the twins will finish the job.

RedCan-99

He absolutely will and we still have Yang, Ruby, and Pyrrha left to go :)

Cody

This chapter was amazing! First Jaune reunites with practically everybody and then Nora forces Blake and Weiss with Jaune into a room not only to get her time with him but to find out details that went on between him and Weiss as Nora would tend to do. It would seem that next chapter might have a foursome as embarrased as they are I don't think Blake or Weiss will leave knowing how good it feels and we know Blake doesn't mind watching. Also poor Blake's clone she died I was really hoping she would meet up with Jaune again but sadly someone offed her probably Neo or something but probably not as Blake said her neck was snapped and I don't think Neo is physically strong enough to do that and she prefers stabbing anyway. But I also noticed that you gave Blake's Shadow Clones the same characteristics as Naruto's given that she also gains the memories when they perish which was a nice touch for her upgraded semblance. Hopefully she will make another one but maybe not given you had her say that she didn't want to. Either way incredible chapter and looking forward to the next one

Cody

Damn you... It's almost 10pm where I live, and there's a Mexican restaurant near my house... now I'm hungry, lol

TheDistur6edGuy

I genuinely like Nora in most stories but not in this one because it feels like Jaune let's her just walk all over him for no reason at all. She just says and does whatever she wants and everyone just goes along with it

Poison

I mean in a way Nora's behavior makes sense. She grew up as an orphan with only Ren. I can totally see her being ok with a bunch of sister-wives because she knows Jaune will love them all equally

Jebus03911

"Here lies Jaune Arc, died of broken pelvis, ground to dust."

DB

And here we see a wild Nora, in her natural habitat. Making sure herself, her man and her fellow girlfriends are satisfied.

Psychsoldier756


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