Oops. Correction. I forgot a 'What If' detail...
Added 2024-09-07 03:59:09 +0000 UTCLast night, I realized a tiny but very significant side content detail I missed in the end of August build with all the life stuff that was going on last month. 😓
In the build there's a new "What If" story called "Objection" which is an alternate ending to End #3: Mimic.
The detail that was omitted:
"To Be Continued."
This was always the plan for this story to continue, but with everything that happened, I didn't have time the time & energy to finish it last month.
I forgot to include the "to be continued" after the end of part 1! Very sorry for the mistake, I'm sure that seemed very abrupt and dissatisfying!
❗❗ MINOR SPOILERS BELOW ❗❗ (Nothing significant but fyi.)
Objection will have 2 endings like a typical 'What If' story.
Minor development update:
Writing has been happening (small progress but any progress is worth celebrating atm!)🥂 and the next CG for Brandon's route (featuring Brandon & Julian) has been assigned to the artist.
Tiny sneak peek (no major spoilers):
I'll post a bigger sample for Clairvoyant+ members in a couple days after I do some editing. 😊
Common route update:
Peach played the first half of the Remembrance demo on YouTube. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=87GrZ1SCEG8)
After watching that... I realized the beginning of the common route feels a bit bloated (before you reach the boys anyway). Also I may have... over-emphasized the Ethereals' passion for their protocols. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I'll be taking some time to trim down some of that. Not removing any plot details or anything of significance, just trying to speed things along a bit faster.
That'll be some ongoing work over the next couple of months.
Comments
Oooh, this looks all very promising! I'm very curious to read Objection Part 2, but no pressure. :D Loved all the Brandon route snippets, too! But for the record, I didn't feel the common route was too bloated when I read it the first time. I think it did a very good job setting up the new world and characters. And I don't know, protocols are important, man. Where would we be without protocols? :p I'm so happy you found some time to write! I hope you're doing well and wish you all the best, Arewar!
Moonshadow_N7
2024-09-08 08:34:33 +0000 UTCThere are protocols for decreasing the quantity of protocols.
Arewar
2024-09-07 04:08:37 +0000 UTCBut THE PROTOCOLS
Wisp of Thought
2024-09-07 04:07:53 +0000 UTC
