Filling in the details of the fisting scene
Added 2017-08-24 05:30:29 +0000 UTCHiyas! I shared a little excerpt a few days ago that didn't quite make the cut. Looks like the vast majority of you would like to read little scenes like that in the future. I wish I had more to share right now but I end up keeping most of the stuff I write. But next time I do take a wrong turn, I'll try to clean it up a bit and share it for the $1 pledges.
I almost deleted the post itself. I guess the main thing I didn't like about it is how it lacked sexual detail. I like to take my time and describe how things look and how people react and I don't think I had much of any of that in that excerpt.
I doubled down today and edited all I had written of the fisting scene and filled in more detail where appropriate. But, I need to be cognizant that it's a balancing act. I don't want to go in so much detail that I make it unbearable to people who are neutral toward fisting.
Anyway, not sure if I mentioned this last time: One of the fetishes of this scene will be "innocence". Does that have a better name? Let me elaborate: Amy is up first and she has no idea what she's doing. You and Mrs. Curie show her the ropes. She's so innocent you have to guide her hand for her at first. She's a quick learner though. ;)
Oh, I started working on a new picture with my artist. It's the scene where Casey, the twins, and you "have a slumber party" in the dorm.
