Minor Spoilers: An unused excerpt from the fisting scene
Added 2017-08-22 04:11:16 +0000 UTCUpdate: Yikes. Reread this excerpt and now I'm a little embarrassed about it. I would not consider it "high quality". I'm thinking about deleting this post, but I think it already went out to everyone via email! Don't judge me too harshly :(
Hi guys/gals! The fisting scene is coming along nicely and it's already pretty long. 10 passages as it is and I'm only up to 3 fingers inserted. I'm actually a little concerned with how long it's getting. I fear that people who dislike or are neutral to fisting may be bored with it. Now that I "type that out loud", I guess I should have some moments where you can bail out early.
I wrote this passage that I decided to cut out. The reason I cut it out is because it was too much like a Biology class (but this scene happens in the Bio Chem class) and there were some things that happened in it that just seemed to repeat later in different ways. Most importantly, I'd normally go over a passage like this multiple times and fill in some lewd details. But I didn't do that with this one yet. In the end I scavenged about half of its ideas for other parts of the scene and threw away the rest. But there's enough there worthy of sharing and I thought it would be a shame to just throw it away. But, it does contain some spoilers as to what happens before this point.
I have a poll at the bottom. The question is, would you be interested in me sharing throw away content like this in the future? Full disclosure: If there's interest, I might make throw away content like this a $1 pledge reward.
Here's the scene below.
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It requires a little setup. Olivia's punishment is to get naked on all fours on the teacher's desk. She spreads her butt cheeks while the class finishes their assignment.
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About 5 minutes pass and you spend that time counting the students you catch looking at Olivia. They start to realize they won't get in trouble for peeking. A couple are so bold they stare for long periods of time. You make sure to report it back to Olivia while it's happening. Her knees start to get uncomfortable on the desk so you bundle a few lab coats and place them under her.
"Mrs. Curie?" A student raises her hand.
"Come to the front, dear."
The student brings her beaker with her and asks, "Does this look right to you?"
"Hrm, no not really," Mrs. Curie replies. "Is this supposed to be water, oil, or silicon based?"
"Water."
Mrs. Curie dips her finger tip in it and rolls it around. "This is being absorbed into my skin way too fast." She extends her hand toward Olivia and says, "Come."
They walk over to Olivia's backside while continuing the conversation. "This lube is a problem and here's why. Imagine you've got a little on your finger and you're trying to slide it in there." She circles her finger tip mere inches away from Olivia's vagina. "It'll go in fine, but if you were to go in and out a few times, it would dry up. Then Olivia would be left providing the rest of the lubrication. And, she doesn't look like she has much to offer right now, does she?"
The student hesistates, but Mrs. Curie waits until she puts her hands on her knees as she looks. Olivia groans and closes her knees a bit but she's obedient about keeping herself spread. "No, not really," the student replies.
"By the way," Mrs. Curie says, "her natural lubrication is different from the kind you're making. Hers is made from carbohydrates, amino acids, proteins, and other acids. And, obviously, it's not produced by mixing ingredients in a beaker like you are. No, not at all.
"You see, during sexual arousal, blood will flow here, here, and in there." She pointed to the vulva, clitoris, and vagina, respectively. "That will cause it to swell. As an example, if Olivia were to get any sort of enjoyment out of her punishment, you might see these 3 places blush red, just like your little face is doing right now.
"Moving on. Now imagine you were sticking your finger somewhere that doesn't self lubricate like right here." Mrs. Curie circles her finger near Olivia's anus and Olivia leans forward to gain a little space. Mrs. Curie doesn't take the hint and moves her finger closer. "As you can see, there's no natural lubrication there." The student glances down and nods. "I'm sure you've learned all this already in biology class?"
"Y-yes, Ms. Darwin taught me all this already. Well," she clears her throat and glances at Olivia's vagina, "not what her, umm, secretion is made out of."
"Good! I would expect as much. Anyway, I'm sure you could imagine how that would be even worse. Your finger could be wiggling around in there when the lube dries up and it would be very painful to get yourself out."
Mrs. Curie wraps her arm around the student and walks her back to the side of the desk. "Anyway, it's salvageable. I'd say you just need to add more glycerin, ok?"
The student smiles back and says, "Thanks Mrs. Curie!"
"You're welcome, dear."