Smart as a Whip
Added 2021-12-11 03:04:12 +0000 UTCHey guys - I wrote a longer story and I don
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Huh, I wouldn’t have drawn that connection, but I see it. Thanks! I love using clothes and hair that way.
Derek Williams
2021-12-11 19:01:31 +0000 UTCThis is great. Reminded me so much of your first ‘Carter’s Crew’ story which for me personally is your hottest story. I love the way you reflect personality and mental changes through clothes and hair. Would have happily paid for this one. Thanks so much!
Sacher
2021-12-11 18:42:46 +0000 UTCThank you! I was reading some of the complaints in the ‘dumbing down’ thread on the GSS forum and I wanted to see if intelligence gain could also be sexy. I’m pretty happy it worked! There are so many dangling plot threads in this story, I might have to revisit the universe from other perspectives — Michael and Ryan falling in love, Colby learning to fuck, Jack going to the club every night to show off his ass and wondering if Dalton will show, Josh sneaking off on Candace, or any of the 20 or so frat rats we barely mentioned. Would anyone be into little sequels or vignettes if I feel inspired?
Derek Williams
2021-12-11 18:09:38 +0000 UTCGreat story! A really interesting transformation in a very hot setting. I really liked the way you explored the different aspects of this.
Anonymous
2021-12-11 17:07:05 +0000 UTC
