Okay, finally, I've gotten some time to sit down and work on this (thanks for being patient <3) I've decided to change a couple of things like poses and added a new bottom panel for better flow. I will most likely change the next few pages a bit too I imagine.
I'm tempted to do a human version of the anon after this one if I have time!
Also posting a slightly earlier version just to get into the habit of sharing literally any progress, instead of JUST the highlights, for anyone interested in the progress itself.