Beta QQ5
Added 2023-10-18 01:47:29 +0000 UTCHere is the first 7k of QQ5! Please feel free to catch up with the story on my master list and come back to this! Tbh I'm kinda stuck so please comment or message me after reading about where you think this should go next.
Ofc being a beta reader isn't at all necessary so if you just wanted Unsaid Vow that's totally cool too!
Comments
I love this story so much! I definitely liked the choice of including what’s happening outside of the games so we can gauge if Jungkook’s true intentions. I think getting to see Jungkook’s perspective of what comes after the games would also be interesting. :)
bee
2023-12-06 07:22:17 +0000 UTCRegarding where you should go next, maybe there could be an excerpt in a future chapter from JK’s POV regarding how he felt when he first laid eyes on Y/N? Another plot point could be how JK and Y/N actually execute their plan in offing Team One. Again, these are just ideas that were buzzing in my head. Your creativity is admirable in its own right — hence the reason why I love this story so much! 😁
Te
2023-10-28 00:53:24 +0000 UTCThank you so much for not abandoning QQ! I am over the moon that you are continuing to add more depth to this amazing story. I love that you introduced key background players and the overarching tone you have set for the remainder of the series. Seeing Y/N get some fire in her belly when the girl from One was verbally attacking her was long overdue. I’m so excited to see where things develop from here. Happy writing! ❤️❤️
Te
2023-10-28 00:48:48 +0000 UTC
