Fecund Archaeology ch2
Added 2018-05-01 20:52:51 +0000 UTCHere is chapter 2 of my current story! Hope you all enjoy!
Caitlin awakes in a hospital bed to find that not only has her body expanded into that of a curvaceous beauty, but she hardly even looks like herself anymore! She's been the victim of a nano-virus attack and the worst part is, the virus isn't done with her, not by a long shot. Will she give up and accept her fate? Hell no! She's a fighter! To the gym! But just what is she turning into and what does her attacker want?
Btw, which story title do people prefer? This or 'The Cultural Sensitivity Training of Dr. Caitlin McMurray' ?
Comments
Thank you so much for the feedback! Its always good to see someone reading so closely that they catch mistakes that we didn't. I don't know what the deal is with those hyperlinks btw, something odd that happens occasionally in scrivener with copy-pasting I think. Chapters 1 & 2 as posted are probably 99% complete but still open to revision if I need to change anything to make the plot work down the road, or if errors like these are caught.
Coffee Tank
2018-10-01 08:24:42 +0000 UTCI also have a few edits that were missed: Page 12 : "The FBI detective leaned produced a business card from his PDA case and leaned forward to give it to her." -->leaned Page 19 : "“Hah!” Maria couldn’t help but be amused at the question. Sure they were all her, but they were most certainly not what nature had given her." -->Maria Character sneaking in from Ren-Faire? :P Page 42 : "Two hours later Caitlin had lost herself in her work, and completely lost track of the number of times she’d returned to the break room for just one more slice. She ignored her" -->Is a file hyperlink that shouldn't be there
Docmani
2018-09-30 19:53:49 +0000 UTCDamn, it's been a long while since I've checked in here. I still fully support your stuff though. :D This story is great! If the virus starts affecting her mentally then you almost touch on bimbofication territory. Something I'd actually like to see you perhaps taking a serious stab at writing a story for?
Docmani
2018-09-30 19:50:47 +0000 UTCI really like where you are going with this! Cant wait for the next!
DUMMYac
2018-05-06 23:32:52 +0000 UTC
