SSS X (the final chapter)
Added 2017-04-07 05:02:59 +0000 UTC
It is finished! SSS is laid to rest. This took a few months longer than I planned. I am very proud to present the final chapter (and epilogue) of Saint, Sinner, Succubus. Coffee and I worked this chapter over hard. It was by far the hardest to get right, but I really feel like it's where it should be. So without any further ado, enjoy!
Merkava IV
Comments
Great story, nice ending.. woulda been nice to see the expansion at the end that was alluded too.
ThatswhatIappreciatesaboutyou
2017-04-08 00:01:09 +0000 UTCI am not a fan of expository epilogues. I try to write them as loose-end tidying extensions of the story. And now I need to go read the end of Made With a Purpose again to see how it's similar. Thank you for the comments! -MerkavaIV
Coffee Tank
2017-04-07 17:28:26 +0000 UTCAgreed. The epilogue was definitely not what I expected. Reminds me a bit of MWAP. Fight scenes were great though.
2017-04-07 17:01:22 +0000 UTCIt was a interesting ending to say the least. (Edit: it wasn't disappointing!!!) While trying not to spoil it for anyone, I feel like it lacked the good old expansion and fun between Natalie and Matt we got used to. I understand it's a closure but still would have been nice to see some of that happen. That's what it all started with after all :P (and we voted on it in excess in the poll a while back)
Muad3D
2017-04-07 08:18:41 +0000 UTC
