Reader Poll: What next?
Added 2016-05-17 01:42:22 +0000 UTC Hey all, Merkava IV here. I wanted to bounce some things off of you all. I would say that this is a shameless attempt at feedback, except that it's an opportunity for all of you to have some say in what I do next.
To give you some timeline context, Chapter VIII of SSS is in the chamber, waiting for my target date following some final touch ups. Chapter IX is not far behind that (probably around July) and chapter X is looking like August (it's a bit rougher. I have a finished version, but it's not close to what I would call up to my current standards).
It's the follow-on that I am leaving up to you all. Currently there are two projects that stand out...
Option A: Revise, edit, and most importantly FINISH: A&A, the story that put me on the BE/PE TF map. You probably all know how this one goes.
Option B: Work on the third and final book of my magical trilogy, an as of yet unnamed book about a woman named Claire, the daughter of Tamera, a witch, and Beatrix, her curvaceous roommate with a significant secret. This would be a story with BE, some PE, FUTA. This story is going to be lighter (think raunchy RomCom maybe?), and focuses on the final type of magic I am going to write about in my universe, specifically, my take on witchcraft.
There is one more major tale in the works, but it's not nearly mature enough to even start to think about here, as well as some short stories that might or might not take root.
So please, let me know what you want to see. A, B or if you have a good idea but don't feel like you can write it, hit me up with some concepts. I might just take that and run with it instead.
Comments
CoffeePilot here, thanks for all the suggestions! As you said we asked for em so can't complain about getting them. You have quite the selection of very detailed ideas to work with, have you tried writing your own stories ever? You certainly have the creativity for it though I know from experience that there's a huge difference between having the ideas and actually getting them down into a coherent, plot driven story. I can't speak 100% for Merkava but I know there's stuff you mention that could use and stuff that's a little outside our tastes. I will agree that we need to get away from 'PFM' (pure fucking magic) as a standard method of expansion & transformation. It is admittedly a very easy trope to use (cause magic can do anything, it's magic!) and I certainly am working on multiple story ideas that involve some of the alternative methods you mentioned (pills, viruses, DNA editing, hormones, etc). Speaking of which, have you read Udderly Smooth? No magic in that! :) On the flip side the catch of not using magic is it makes it harder to expand people to the sizes you're talking about without making it unrealistic. Merkava and I both enjoy taking our expansion to the limits of what's physically realistic and plausible without going too far, so sorry but you probably won't see guys growing torso-length dicks anytime soon (though if it's reasonably sized to the guy and he's huge it could be that big relative to a much shorter gal, but then there's the biological issues of it fitting into her, etc). I would say if you want to read an awesome story with a girl having a penis run through her from bottom to top then read 'Siren Song' by Paul Gerard. I actually helped edit that. Other than not nescesarrily going to the size extreme's you're wanting (sorry), I do really like a lot of your other ideas. I'll send you a private message with more details. Like I said I have a whole mess of stories on the back burner, some of which already incorporate some of these themes, and I could probably work some of your other ideas in as well. Finally, we are starting to explore the idea of doing story comissions. Perhaps since you have such specific ideas you'd be interested in that? I caution though, as Merkava and I have said numerus times, our free time to write can be severely limited by our real lives and jobs, so no promises on when we'll be able to get to it. Right now our priorities are finishing what we've already got started. Thanks again though for the input! :)
Coffee Tank
2016-06-15 19:40:37 +0000 UTCOne final note- personally I'm not into futanari stuff or gender/bending at all.
2016-06-15 14:27:42 +0000 UTCSorry if that was super wordy, it was copied over from a post I made a long time ago and I think it gives a pretty clear idea of what turns me on. The important thing is the last part, I would like to see you move away from magic and into the world of sexy science, there are so many semi-realistic possibilities there with genetic engineering, stem cells, modified viruses, sex obsessed shapeshifting life-forms (XXXecil's Bodyshifters being an excellent example of the latter) etc that could serve as a theme. I like that your female protagonists are smart, and I think I'd like to see a story where two mutually sex-obsessed bio-science teen phenoms (18+ of course) tap into their genius to create the world's most perfect orgasms. You could even create a 2nd, "sexual brain" located in the private parts themselves (after all there will be plenty of room for that in the private parts as they enlarge), or if you want to approach another way, a boosting of one's "sexual IQ" that is concerned with innovating new ways to feel continually increasing pleasure. Sorry, you wanted suggestions, I took it and ran with it.
2016-06-15 14:11:31 +0000 UTCI am a huge fan of Merkava's writing and a brand new pledge. I hope that one or both of you can work on something with an outline similar to as follows: 1. Sci-fi/fantasy theme, mostly hetero (maybe some light lesbianism) 2.Penis growth. Should start normal then slowly yet continually grow larger and larger until it's length reaches from a woman's pussy to the top of her head, somehow directly activating pleasure centers in her brain (should be at the level of or slight above guy's nipples by end of story). Girth can be as large as 5" in diameter. Can get larger if the protagonists get taller (though height should not exceed 8' for the guy and 7' for the girl. Once it gets bigger, it can't get smaller! Circumcised, well shaped, slight upward curve, some veins, stands up on it's own at about 45 degrees. Wide, flaring, mushroom dickhead almost the size of the woman's head. Balls the size of cantaloupes. 3. Correlated continual increase in virility. Guy first gets hard more often at base state, then perpetually hard with precum drip at base, then perpetually hard with continuous precum flow at base, then continuous sperm flow at base, then continual increase in flow at base state. Cock gets harder and harder, then gains consistency of rock, then almost painfully erect and throbbing. Orgasms become more and more prolonged and powerful, eventually spurting thick creamy spunk for minutes or even hours in a thick steady stream. Cock can also hold a woman's weight under it's own rigidity alone. 4. Increase in women's sexuality. Correlated continual increase in vaginal viscosity and squirting, nearly rivaling prodigious production of male sperm. Increased libido over time and desire for orgasm/bigger cock/more cum. Wants to alter her body's hormones to produce results that will get her man even HOTTER, spurring more virility. 5. Woman's size obsession. Both woman and man wants his cock and balls bigger but especially the woman. She has a size fetish that slowly builds out of hand, is absolutely OBSESSED with huge cock/balls and his sperm production, the bigger the cock/load the bigger her orgasms, and the more she wants more. Has some control over the mechanism by which the guy gets bigger, i.e. persuades him to take more of some pill/hormone/pharmacrop or simply injects him directly. Good example of the idea found in the dissapointingly unfinished "genie" story posted under "Imported" user name ("shooter" the original author). 6. Loss of control. Hormone/pills/pharmacrop/alien vegetation/magic has some sort of addictive quality, leading to the couple losing all control of the situation as virility and orgasms increase exponentially. Could also be some sort of mental change (as in "genie") that leads to a loss of control. 7. Continually improving physiques of both male and female to utter sex God status, including perfectly spherical basketball sized tits and long hair for the women and enhancements of muscles used in fucking, especially in woman's legs and privates. 8. Increases in sensitivity and orgasmic ability. 9. ANTICIPATION! (Not too long, but enough to make the payoff worthwhile.) An idea I had where this could all be put to use was two genius high school AP biochem students meet each other, fall in love, and decide they want to have the best sex ever together so they put their IQ's to work creating formulas for each other to engineer hormones/pills/pharmacrops to create the perfect sexual partner. The important thing is to start slow then gradually ramp it up to over the top obscene fucking.
2016-06-15 14:02:58 +0000 UTCWell it's set in my current story universe (in fact the main magical protagonist is mentioned in passing in SSS) so anything is possible, but currently there isn't so much transformation planned as much as alteration. I don't know if that makes sense, but it's all I will say right now as I don't want to let the cat out of the bag. Thanks for the feedback!
Coffee Tank
2016-05-17 20:33:06 +0000 UTCI'm going to be super useful and say C for all of the above. I guess I'm hankering for some Futa though so if C isn't a thing then I choose B. I should clarify in that I'm hankering for good Futa. There's all kinds of bad out there. I don't even know if the stuff I like is true Futa content or more along the lines of the transgender/transformation fetish but if your story was going to include a girl growing a dick I'd love to read it.
ktc
2016-05-17 14:06:30 +0000 UTCThanks for the feedback!
Coffee Tank
2016-05-17 01:45:27 +0000 UTCPersonally I would like to see A&A continue and be finished up! That would be quite amazing!
Sarah Silver
2016-05-17 01:44:37 +0000 UTC