Saint, Sinner, Succubus - Chapter VII

I wrote comments on this story when I read them on TOB and they still stand, this is a very entertaining story that is well written and seems to be heading towards a cataclysmic finale - Satan himself along with Demons and Angels in the mix too. I sure Hope that Matt's love for Natalie will be strong enough. Can't Wait for the next bit

KTC, Thanks for the very detailed feedback. I will have you know that there are things in the works that you will like. Not so much with SSS, but things down the pipe. Not that you don't like what's going on in SSS, but that I will be checking some of those blocks that you've established in the not too distant future. --MerkavaIV

Coffee Tank

I realized after posting this that my comments were more directed at Markerva, but I have also read your stuff Coffee and enjoyed the Ren Faire series immensely. Hoping you both continue!

ktc

I enjoyed your scenes involving Angela, the blowjob/dick growth with Natalie and Matt. I did give the Udderly Smooth a read and while some of the transformations in that one I am not personally fond of the overall story is written too well to really complain. Hope to see more soon!

ktc

I meant to add more, so sorry for the double posts 5. Giantism - My fetish can best be explained by the Giantess comic done by Bustartist. I don't want the Giantess to be crushing me or harming others, I just think big boobs, big ass, and long legs are all sexually exciting and Giantessim allows the Women to not be immobile 6. Furprons - So long as it's not full on bestial transformation, I have nothing against catgirls, cowgirls, dogegirls etc but of all the fetishs I'm into this is not my preffered. I also prefer them to stay mostly humanoid, just with the animalistic traits i.e cat girl ears, cow horns/tail etc. 7. BDSM - This is where it gets iffy. When I say BDSM I really just want the female/person to be receiving pleasure. It's a very dominant/sub relationship that I find enjoyable that isn't specifically degrading to either party. The only thing that I really dislike is loss of intelligence. Reading about a girl becoming stupid is a huge turn off for me. Rape would be on that list as well. Anything non-consensual is a pretty big turn off. I'm not going to tell you what to write, but I figured some insight on what I like as a reader can help you maybe story direction wise.

ktc

It's hard to say what should be written as that might creatively stunt somebody to only one thing. I'll list off the things I'm interested in and give you examples in your own work that I've enjoyed. 1. Breast Expansion - A no brainer given where you initially posted your works but I love BE so much it got me into other things in the pursuit of it. I'm not personally a fan of permanent house sized tits, but the bigger the better as a general statement still mostly applies. Breasts the size of yoga balls, visible form behind etc are sitll right up my alley. 2. The women receiving pleasure. Maybe this is tied to me having only ever had one girlfriend, but I have always found women getting off to be very exciting for me. It seems obvious but some people are more into porn to get themselves off over others or their partners and I am not one of those people. 3. Futanari - this I feel is tied more directly to #2, but because it gives me a common ground so to speak I've found quite a lot of futa porn to be very enjoyable. 4. Dick growth - This is also tied to 2 and 3 I'd say as I rather like reading about girls growing big sensitive dicks and to a lesser extent dudes. If you get too big you kinda spoil the "realism" as anything over 8 inches is probably too big for normal sex with many women so 12 + while an enticing subject to think about and imagine what it'd feel like to have so many nerves in one spot is simultaneously . Oddly enough I prefer no testes in my futa porn but as with lots of porn there's really quite a lot of variety among sub-genres anyways.

ktc