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Oren's Forge PG 325

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I've said it before, I just wanted to reiterate: I really like the expressions Teagan gives her anthros. I feel like she has one of the better styles I've seen. The animals look like their animal counter parts and their bodies look natural in both all fours and upright. its remarkable. SWift on all fours looks as natural as when she's upright. And its not like how some people draw them, where their bodies must transform in order work. their bodies seem mechanically functional. Very nice work.

Lord ryven

You know, the next page I do switch to the colored speech bubbles and it's intentionally very clear that there's a chance for miscommunication. I remember going back and forth on coloring the "Wait" and last speech bubble and I honestly don't remember why I decided not to. In hindsight, I definitely should have, so I'm going to fix that imminently..! Thanks for bringing this up!

Teagan Gavet

A couple people in the discord server noticed that the last two panels have white text instead of green text As we understand it, white text generally means that everyone in the scene can understand what is being said. Green text means unaccustomed predators can't understand, and red text means unaccustomed prey can't understand. It appears that Swift is close enough now to be within conversation distance, and to me is part of the active sphere of conversation. It makes sense that Swift would understand the panicked "Wait--!" but not the rest of what is being said. Or does she actually understand Rask begging Oren to let him talk to her first?

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