Oren's Forge PG 299
Added 2023-12-18 22:00:03 +0000 UTCNew page out next Monday!
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Comments
Ah yeah, looking at it with fresh eyes, it is a little jarring without the blood. I'll add it in when I have a sec!
Teagan Gavet
2024-03-18 16:44:58 +0000 UTCHi Teagan. I was looking through the comic to remember the stories and I just noticed it now. Swift has blood on his chin on page 298. On page 299, in the first panel, she also has blood on her chin, but in the remaining panels and pages there is no blood on her chin. Did Swift lick it off? (cleaned)
Krzysztof K
2024-03-16 19:15:41 +0000 UTCShould have killed Singer.. then she could tell any story she wants.
Lord ryven
2023-12-19 16:19:53 +0000 UTCPoor Scree’s in a tough position now. She turned on the big pack to save Swift but now Swift won’t take her either. She’ll likely struggle to convince Seral to leave his potential place in the new pack too, so she’s essentially packless now. Her ideals have scuppered her in both directions. She was too loyal and brave to let Singer and Keen kill Swift, but too ableist to have a place by Swift’s side after.
Sarah
2023-12-19 10:51:45 +0000 UTCWell, she DID leave for the sake of her pups AND mate, and was ready to die for them. So logically saving her life won't sway her that much on this specific point.
Reseen Dalls
2023-12-19 10:24:16 +0000 UTCThey could still be flying over! It's been a month for us reading it but I'm guessing the entire sequence has taken less than 5 minutes since the first blood
Gale Tazzin
2023-12-19 03:47:25 +0000 UTCThis might be just me, but I think it would have been a neat touch to see a raven landing in the grass behind the scree in the first panel and maybe two in the last panel....you know...for Keen.
Kairo
2023-12-19 02:18:16 +0000 UTCHard spot, Scree.
Amethysmus
2023-12-19 00:28:11 +0000 UTCI hope Singer doesn’t run into Red if he’s going to re-group with Seral.
Microgrampup
2023-12-19 00:16:20 +0000 UTCRemember what the marten said~
Latias
2023-12-18 23:41:21 +0000 UTCSwift stay away from the forest >: all that smoke is pretty dangerous to breath in
Fate
2023-12-18 23:33:43 +0000 UTCWhere is Keen's body? You think he would be lying not too far from them.
Emily Grant
2023-12-18 22:54:56 +0000 UTCThis feels rash, can she really afford to squander any support right now?
Tru7h
2023-12-18 22:45:45 +0000 UTCRed dead with hemlock holding the spear! The scalps of two pups hanging from her waist!!
Lord ryven
2023-12-18 22:34:57 +0000 UTCHell yeah it was.
Lord ryven
2023-12-18 22:33:56 +0000 UTCGoing to investigate the forest like you said to your father for real this time?
Microgrampup
2023-12-18 22:19:18 +0000 UTCThis was a great scene.
Grey
2023-12-18 22:12:14 +0000 UTCBack into the fire she goes, but what will she find???
Dhaka Yeena
2023-12-18 22:01:02 +0000 UTC
