Oren's Forge PG 297
Added 2023-12-04 22:00:04 +0000 UTCNew page out next Monday!
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Small note about the layout:
I made a deliberate decision to ‘jump the line’ here from the previous page/last panel— I wanted to embody the idea of a snap cut to Swift whipping her head to look at Scree. It also serves to reframe the scene, pivoting from “okay, we dealt with one problem, now I deal with you.” (If anyone was wondering why I did that.)
Comments
Ah, thank you for letting me know! Fixed it! :]
Teagan Gavet
2024-02-06 02:18:28 +0000 UTChello, I recently joined your patreon and noticed this page is missing from the collection for volume two. I looked through the collections when I first joined and today decided to poke around and see what other goodies I could find elsewhere and now I'm here
RandomDragon2.0
2024-02-06 00:49:10 +0000 UTCAdding blood to her face, makes her look much more intimidating. lol
Lord ryven
2023-12-15 21:42:10 +0000 UTCIt is not Seral under them.i believe his name is Keen.
Emily Grant
2023-12-11 19:08:11 +0000 UTCI reread this page and now I'm just noticing they're having this conversation overtop of Serals dying self LOL
CelestialChaos
2023-12-11 12:30:12 +0000 UTCOn one hand, I know where swift is coming from. But also, scree just saved her life. Scree earned a stay of execution at the very least. Scree may have come to betray Swift and her pack. But when it came to decision time, she chose loyalty to swift and her pups.
Lord ryven
2023-12-06 17:47:10 +0000 UTCWolf muzzles are self cleaning. My girl caught and obliterated a pretty big fat ground hog, and in the time it took me to go grab a trash bag, she cleaned her face.
Lord ryven
2023-12-06 17:45:02 +0000 UTCIt's a bit weird to me that Swift's muzzle is clean immediately after
Kairo
2023-12-05 07:37:32 +0000 UTClol, the wheeze.
Lord ryven
2023-12-04 23:43:20 +0000 UTCNailed it! They needed to have this scene and glad it happened right away!
Amethysmus
2023-12-04 23:40:52 +0000 UTCBetter choose to it words carefully scree
Dhaka Yeena
2023-12-04 22:04:15 +0000 UTCI think you did well with the paneling! A good example of knowing the rule enough to break it. It fits the scene! Ps- dying at the "wheeze"
Hail - DOW Comic
2023-12-04 22:02:43 +0000 UTC
