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Oren's Forge PG 177

Just a heads up-- I'm going to take next Monday off from posting since we have five this month.  I really need to play catch-up on some other projects and hopefully get ahead a bit for the holidays.

Oren's Forge PG 177

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if anything to sort of honor what Sprig wanted to do with Rask...sorta like hes becoming the new Sprig for lack of better word maybe.

Ceriu

Someone's probably going to have to take up the role of warding off the predators and faking the bear marks, I'm betting Rask will.

Majestical

Still, Rask, is the strongest fighter of all of them. Stronger than hemlock defiantly. Now the question is can he be as crafty as Sprig.

Chris Jones

Teagan wrote such interesting characters with depth, and it's a shame to see people not see beyond the surface.

BC

They may have to, else they've lost three all told, including two of their best. Rask isn't going to make up for that.

BritishRabbit

Well this has been a disaster for the hollow. Two dead including the one they were relying upon to ward off large predators. Now their best fighter in self imposed exile. Which leaves them Rask who is talking about spreading the news that the hollow exists. It's not going to get better in the immediate future most like, if anything it'll get worse.

BritishRabbit

I imagine the best outcome for hemlock would be to establish an independent community with the same safety through obscurity as the hollow. Perhaps following generations would improve on the disposition of their parents.

Tru7h

It's sort of what I expected to happen, though I am surprised she would not take her "tooth" with her. I have some theories as to where this might be headed, but we'll see where Teag' takes us next :3

Lauri

Those expressions, so moving! Her reaction is understandable, after the terrible loss she suffered she is afraid of experiencing it again. It's relatable in a way. Even if I doubt she'll stay on her own much time. She desires company too much for that.

Reseen Dalls

I'll admit that I'm not the biggest fan of Hemlock, but that was uncalled for and distasteful to say the least.

Tygre13

Bye bitch

Amber

So what do we have? Two corpses and she decided to leave the shelter. Alas, we will not revive two corpses, but we can return Hemlock.

sansanik

Have a nice rest.

sansanik

I think he already did that when he dropped his spear. And with no explicit expulsion from the tribe, that chance would seem to be on going.

Tru7h

I mean. It's been shown that Hemlock will lose in a fight without her spear. Interesting she'd choose potential death over even attempting a new way of life. I love Hemlock lots, but this was the best course of action IMO. Hope to see her come back or turn a new leaf!

vvingblade

Called it... But it's interesting to see where the story will go from here... will Rask try to find her later? Giver her the chance that she never gave him? Would be interesting.

Maximus Coyotox

WHAT? Danm I was not expecting this.

Chris Jones


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