SG's Hyp-Ref: Sleepy in the Library - Editing Banter

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“ Sleepygirl describes a dream she had about a pair of men roaming the library knocking out the girls and hypnotizing them into something more intimate and ultimately forgettable… for her anyways. “

SG: first reaction: i...have questions…

Me: yes?

SG: I think it was something along the lines of...when did this happen?

Me:kind of a fictional idea i had 

(Note: She’s not hypnotized during this conversation so I thought I would test the suggestions to not realize this was her writing.)

SG: oh yeah you were talking about another email story weren't you, i didn't realize i was involved :cP sorry...brain oozing out of ears

Me: is that ok?

SG: hehe yeah I don't mind

(Note: and it seemed to have worked perfectly!)

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“But in any case, I'll stop rambling now and get to the porn. :oP”

SG: this is eerily close to my writing style :oP  

(Note:  ROLFMAO gee I wonder why?!)
Me: that was the point =cP

SG: i know i'm just pointing it out :oP

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“Behind them on the far wall were a row of five study rooms.”

SG: you described the inside of a library almost as well as i would :oP

Note: LOL, I ‘m have way too much fun with this!

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“dealing with erotic hypnosis, seduction, freezing, and unusual fetishes.”

SG: libraries would be so much more interesting if there were actually books like this

Me: I know right!

SG: seriously my days would be so much more interesting :oP

Me: The parts you were awake for.

SG: either way it would be more fun

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“Finally her head fell back against him and I could see that her eyes had slipped shut, that she was completely unconscious.”

SG: nice image :oP

Note: If she does say so herself =cP

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“I hurried around another corner to hide myself again, watching through the slits in the shelves as the man dragged her down the aisle, then threw her over his shoulder as they entered one of the study rooms.”

SG: always a nice touch...doesn't hurt that it's my personal favorite way of getting carried away :oP

Note: I remember when I read this the first time I spit my water on my screen from laughing. I need to stop doing that. 

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“ I started to protest, to ask him what he thought he was doing, and tried my hardest to struggle against him. One of his hands left my body as he reached into his pocket, and before I could wonder what he was reaching for I found a pocket watch dangling in front of my eyes and swaying gently.”

SG: as if the chloroform wasn't enough...(buttons pushed very successfully, by the way)

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“The man left the watch swaying in front of me as I stared helplessly at it while he started to undress me, bit by bit my clothes were slowly stripped away until I laid there, naked, and his hands started to explore me again.”

SG: slightly more explicit than your other stories, i have to say :oP

Note: here is the irony, I tend to try and not get too explicit in the stories I write, mainly because I’ve found that everyone likes sex a little differently. If I describe it in a way you don’t like it will pull you out of the story, but if I leave it vague, the reader tends to fill in the blanks with what they like. SG however, is just writing this herself based on what SHE likes! Keep that in mind. 

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“And as I felt him lean down to kiss, massage and caress me, I felt his cock slide inside of me, next, rocking into me deeply as his hands moved over every inch of the rest of my body.”

SG: damn...ok this is definitely pushing buttons…

(Note: See previous note =cP)

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“The next thing I knew I felt myself being dragged along the floor, into another room where I was undressed, groped, and made love to. It happened twice more after that, each time I woke up dazed and half dressed or completely naked in one of the private rooms, and each time I ended up wandering through the aisles, even though I'd already been through them numerous times.“

SG: talk about a loop to be stuck in…

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“I was still fuzzy from the hit to the head so everything he said, combined with the pleasure I was feeling, seemed like it was just blurring together. I caught pieces of words here and there...him telling me to relax, to give in, to obey...but eventually I found myself just drifting along with what he was saying while he pleasured me.”

SG: i don't know where this idea came from but i approve...whole heartedly

Note: See above two notes =cP

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“getting kidnapped by pirates”

SG: because why not? :oP

Note: I honestly don’t know if she ever sent me that story or not!?